Hi! I have read all eight chapters in one go, and now...I NEED MORE! XDDD

Nezumi and Sion are just a bundle of sweetness and cuteness mixed together with a few drops of angst, so yummy for my fujoshi's heart! X9

But really, never thought that the bee queen could make Nezumi go back in time, this is really interesting...and sweet. /

I don't even know which part is lies and truth that came from Nezumi's mouth, he's just that talented of an actor.

Aww, I actually prefer Sion's white hair rather than his original color, but meh, can't be helped.

I'm actually quite curious to this Matilda and her daughter, with Sion observation and I think that room is creepy too. Never fond of dolls.

Update please!

I can't wait for the next chapter! OMG! ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGG GGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

This keeps getting more complicated. Love the way you write their relationship. It feels very warm and comforting and yet we still know what happened to Shion in the past. I hope it turns out OK for them! It'll be worth the wait to find out :3

Soooooo Cuuuuuuuute! This is really well written :3

The plot continues to be rich and well-paced. I'm looking forward to chapter 9.

Wow. You are absolutely amazing. This is far, and I mean far, different than what I imagined it to be. I love your writing style. I also love the way you describe everything so well. The fanfiction itself is wonderful. It's both fluffy and somehow sad at the same time. I really, really hope you can update soon 'cause I think I just fell in love with this fanfic and its author! Thank you so much!

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I've missed this fic ;w;

Nezumi got everything under control Shion bby
you should just relax and get better
and let Nezumi love you
and love him back
and cuddle more x3
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It's so adorable this chapter
Nezumi should talk with Shion about everything ;A;
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I'm glad you updated this. The chapter itself feels like the "calm before the storm," and there's also a lot of unresolved sexual tension in the air. You have my attention; please continue!

This just leaves me wondering whether or not Nezumi is evil...

cuddlecuddlecuddlecuddle x3
that's pretty much the chapter XD
lovely, cuddly and lots of hintet "I WUV U 5EVA" Cx

Please I love everything about Nezumi so you can write about him, your stories are more interesting every time I read them. Thanks

I agree that you could do an interesting take on Nezumi's heritage and culture, which was not heavily explored in the anime or even in the novels. Meanwhile, the mysteries continue: what is Elyurias plotting? Does she care at all about Nezumi's and Shion's ultimate fates, or are they simply her pawns in a chess game of cosmic revenge? How is Shion going to react to the fact that both Safu and his mother are in the Correctional Facility, a situation that's even worse than it was in the original timeline? And the biggest one of all: will Shion find out about Nezumi's deal with Elyurias and will Shion be able to forgive Nezumi if the revised timeline results not only in Safu’s death in the Correctional Facility but in his mother's as well? Or will Shion say, in a completely Shion-like way, "I forgive you but I died once; it was my fate; I will die again if it saves my mother and Safu”?

The stage is now set to produce intense drama. I look forward to seeing how you will develop the story.

Very exellently written!

Yahoo! You put up a new chapter Now, the good stuff starts happening. Are there only going to be 11 chapters like the anime?

I continue to be impressed by the originality of the plotting. Unlike some other reviewers, I have no problem with the idea that Elyurias is a vengeful, devious goddess. In the ancient, pagan world, where awful things routinely happened to people, benevolent deities were far more the exception than the rule, and Greek mythology would be far duller if their gods and goddesses didn’t scheme, bicker, and torment as if they were starring in some supernatural soap opera! I expect that Elyurias rewards loyalty but I don’t expect her to be warm and fuzzy.

If, in future chapters, you keep the plot twisting as unexpectedly as you have so far, this fic has the potential to be one of the finest in the No. 6 fandom. I hope you are not planning in making this a tragedy (although “messing with fate” plots can certainly go in this direction), but I can certainly visualize a rip-roaring, white-knuckle story that ends with our favorite couple in love and together. (It seems like the “in love” part is already well on its way.)

Your writing technique is excellent – it’s at a publication-quality level and refreshingly high for fanfiction. [Putting on my beta hat for a moment - you might want to correct “spinal chord” to “spinal cord.”]