Like so many on here, I did not see that ending coming. It was awesome! Hahaha, funny how much I love character death. Uhm, comments on the story... In some parts, I think your mind was racing so much along with the mind of Esme in the story, which is shown in this sentence: I don't ever want to leave you, Carlisle1" Where the 1 is, should be an exclamation point instead :) Since you wrote this June of 2012, it's quite obvious this wasn't as well-written as your newer stories now. The story itself is quite well-known. Fucked up relationship, girl stays because she "loves" guy too much, but the ending was an absolute shocker, a pleasant surprise for an ending that other "broken relationship" stories don't have. I actually don't like stories like these so much, where the girl is so stupid, not leaving, though she's been given plenty of warning signals and lil red flags to bolt out the door, but then again, I myself wrote something like this in a little more angsty manner in "The Only Way." It did remind me of my own fanfic :) Anyway, I liked this, especially the ending. I can't stop reiterating myself on that part, haha. :) Oh and about the song, I am actually not familiar with your hero (Lana Del Rey), but the lyrics is quite nice. I think I saw a music video of her once in the past three months, perhaps. T'was of her in a swimming pool? Hmm. Probably one of her newest songs. Anyway, this is a long-ass review. Haha.
-Aoi.

Omg, I didn't see that ending coming! Wow, wow, wow! Good work. Keep it up.

It was really impressive! And creepy...

This was a strong one i think. I really enjoyed the twist and i want to see more.

Very diffrent for you, but i really liked it. Some stories need a darker tone and this offered that. And i guess it's not really an awful ending because she gets Carlisle and she goes to heaven, so it's actually pretty good, right? Anyway, i really liked it and would love to see it continued.

Oh god that was tragic...

whoa i did not expect that ending

i loved it!
please update soon!

This is soo good :) I just love lana del Rey and this song! It's sad but really it's a love story :) so sweet! I would love for you to continue...Carmen maybe?

So sad :( but I'm glad it has a happy ending :) vote for blue jeans next or off to the races :))