Not bad for a OC. I half-expected to read some really cliched and cheesy story about some Mary-sue and Bakura hooking up for the damn sake of it. At least you know your grammar...

I love this story! It's the best! The one thing that I didn't like so much was all those weird boxes and things. Other than that... It was beautiful. I like the part when Y. Bakura uses those claws. That was so cool. It was a sad but exellent story.

Aw, that was a nice story, although I didn't like the gory scene with Yami Bakura because I'm quite squeamish.

Well done! ^.^

~*~Dreamy-eyes1~*~

This is a really good fic so far, Englasu. I wish I could read the rest now but I have to go to lunch *mutters* Darn hunger!

~*~Dreamy-eyes1~*~

good story

Wonderful story! if you haven't guessed by now, THIS IS NO FLAME!! i just finished reading "The Heart of Bakura" and i just HAD to review. i, love your way of describing how that spirit got inside the ring and how Bakura got inside the Change of Heart card. the entire story was very well written, yet i thought that the gory fight scene could be deleted without taking anything out of it. ok well, i've been ranting on fot too long, see until next time!

P.S. i read all your other stories, they rule!

Well, that was depressing, i'm not saying it wasn't good, but it's DEPRESSING! but good. And Now you have one more review.

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No offence, but I wasn't into this fic as much as the other ones. It was good however, but not your best. Try again though. Heck, I'm not saying I'm the best in the world either. ^_^

WOW!!! This fanfic rocks... it's as good as White Angels fics... Ur a great wrighter... ^-^ Keep up the good work

HAPPY???????!!!!!!!!!!! That was SAD!!!!!!! Well, it was still really good! Is there gonna be a sequel?

Good story!!!!!!! But its so sad.... I don't like sad stories.... Anyways, it was cool! Uh, ya. Thats bout it.

Is that it? Or are there more chapters to come? It shouldn't end now! It was so sad! *sniff* You should really write more if you ask me, but it is just my opinion. //.-

I don't ofeten feel myself compelled to read OC fics,but this one was a nicely written one.And like the sensitive pansy I am,I started bawling at the end....^^;;;;;;...Anyways...Good job!