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   TorchwoodIanto 5/4/13 . chapter 2911? They dont live in america |
| Zebralover4578 4/10/13 . chapter 8 Why haven't I read this before its really really good! |
| anon 4/3/13 . chapter 25 It was a good chapter, your writing improves throughout the story! |
| Mr.Zeze 4/3/13 . chapter 25 Ok I liked this one, it was quite original on how you portrayed Carmen meeting the rest etc, I noticed some mistakes, when Lee asked the waitress for the bill you didn't put speech marks. By the way it should be "burgers" without an apostrophe, and what is "strips"? |
| KatieMusicLuvr177 4/2/13 . chapter 25 This chapter was so good! I can't wait for the next one! |
| doctorwhofan4eva 4/2/13 . chapter 25 :) awesome, can't wait till the next chapters up! :D |
| KatieMusicLuvr177 3/2/13 . chapter 24 I didn't get the joke, but I loved that chapter! I think that it should have mentioned Gus's dad a bit more though. We find out in The Dumping Ground episode 5 that Gus's dad moved to Germany. Still, I love your ideas! Update! |
| KatieMusicLuvr177 3/2/13 . chapter 12 I love this chapter! I love Marco and I think he's so cute! |
| Fire Kitty 12 2/3/13 . chapter 24 I like them all but I like jackies the best |
| jade hamlet 1/31/13 . chapter 1 tracy its not that bad ur mum isnt dead or is not in prison so ur fine dont worry ok tracy you will be just fine ok ur mum loves u so so sos sosososo much dont forget xx |
| jade hamlet 1/31/13 . chapter 22 thats so tight i love u milly so so so so soss sos much and so does ur mum but im not that sure about ur father he could of mured ur mum love jade hamlet xxxx |
| jade hamlet 1/31/13 . chapter 23 poor alice shes a sweet carefull little girl i love alice shes so nice and she thought elane the pain was nice but shes not she has a necklace and it was lovley and i hope she does find a parent who loves her lots and lots |
| JADE HAMLET 1/31/13 . chapter 24 it wasnt gus folt that his mum fell he was dead funny and he always writting in his notepads and when there was a fire he went up in the atic to get them and he got stuck and shouted my notepads i need my notepads tracy came up stairs aND GOT HIM AND NOT HIS NOTEPADS thats how mad he was with them! then tracy had to go to the hozzy she hade broke her was cr5ying he was so upset now let me get back to what i was speeking about gus then was took to elem tree house. |
| jade hamlet 1/31/13 . chapter 18 well when my mum had me she never put me in a bin what a mother would do that a crazy one rio was so nice as well it was roxy who was horrible to all the new people who arrived and she said they were weidos layla had promblems and the rest where just cute including layla i liked her and tracy beaker very funney at least give the baby to the dad if u cant haddle him its just tight and PUTTING HIM IN A BIN THATS TERRIBLE AND SO MEAN TO A BABY! |
| angelwhovian 1/7/13 . chapter 24 Funny joke! Poor Gus |
