If there's ever anything I'd like to wish for now, it would be the way you write.

I've tried creating my own style of writing (something like Yours, something like Mine), but it just doesn't. . . gel.

So yeah, I'm probably envy-crushing on this story right now. But in a good way. : )

I feel more inspired to continue writing. It's a switch that was once turned off, but somehow (aren't we all members of Destiny and Fate , helping each other?) it switched on again.

Thank you. I'm truly excited for the next chapter. Seeing Serizawa treat a girl like that is just GOLD.

Good luck writing the next chappie!
ArYa

First, I can't tell you enough how much I'm loving this story, there's only to parts but, the storyline is very well detailed and it's amazing how you've put it together, I also love how it's got a mystery thing going on with Miyuki's storyline, I'm also getting very very interested in seeing how this story is going to end up.

I really hope you will make more chapters to this story, when I read it feel like I'm the real main chearecter.

I really want to read more of this story. There's not very many story's based on the Crows Zero series which makes it hard for me to sit and read the ones that are already being made, and most o them arent even finished, I'm making my own story based on Crows Zero but it's not as even close to being a amazing and finamimal as yours.

I really hope to get a response to this cause I am really looking forward to reading more of this.

Thank you and my name is Yuki Yin.

I'm loving this story! The details you gave on the characters and actions really help me paint pictures in my head. Truly a job well done! Really looking forward to future chapters and the cute interactions between Miyuki and Serizawa. Overall, brilliant! I will be eagerly awaiting for the oncoming chapters. Please update soon.

I really enjoyed this chapter. You are a fantastic writer and i'm looking forward to read what happens next :)

i am so glad i found a good Crows Zero fic. this is looking promising

Oh, oh, oh! Why didn't I discover this before? It's well-written, I think I smell plot (I think I do!), Serizawa is in-character, and I like your OC. So it's a perfect recipe! Can't wait for more, authoress!

I haven't watched either of the movies yet but I will soon, they seem really cool

Wonderful! Actually, I'm speechless; staring at this screen, cursing at you because you have such a wonderful writing style, a wonderful skill at keeping everyone in character, keeping them interesting, and I'm floundering at what to say. Just know that I loved this chapter, and that I'm impatiently waiting for more!

I really love your style of writing this story. Ugghh I can't want for the next chapter already! I can't wait to see what happens next

Yes, I liked the chapter! Never question your obvious talents, hun, the chapter was intriguing. I love your writing style, how you keep everyone in character, your OC (I just need to know what happened to make her home break apart, and also the fact that Miyuki keeps on referring to her mom as Mother Dearest). And I can't wait for more!

Awesome update - i like your oc, she's definitely interesting and you keep genji and ruka in character, I like it :D Hope you update soon _

I would love to see more D

I recently found this story and may I just say that I am extremely pleased to see such an interesting Crow fanfiction. :) I eagerly await an update. Keep up the excellent work!

I hope you update soon - there's barely any crows fanfictions out there - and yours is so well written and believable. Anyway, keep up the great work :D

This is so good, and everything was just perfect. Serizawa, the setting, your character. What a wonderful opening!