Phoenix: Aie! It's confusing me! (that doesn't take much, but anyway) and now Shadow's here, nosing over my shoulder, with a vacant expression on his face. Now he's critising my speeling. OH Shadow! Look what you made me write!
Shadow: Not my fault.
Phoenix: Sure it is!
Shadow: No it isn't. She said 'Maria'
Phoenix: Shadow... MARIA IS NOT THERE!
Shadow: but I want Maria!
Phoenix: go beat up Sonic, or something.
Shadow: I was going anyway. You aren't worth my time. CHAOS CONTROL *blip*
Phoenix: Uh-oh. Look what your fic made him do. He's gone crazy! Good, but weird. Wait for me, Shadow! *blip*

Whoa. Groovey man. That was deep. I like it! ^.~

ooh, very interesting, a cool twist on the Shadow and Maria story......

Hey, it melted my brain too....WITH ITS COOL FLEETWAY-NESS!!! ADD A NEW CHAPTER!!!

Hey, now there's a theory fic that I didn't see coming...

Actually, it's quite interesting...
In any case: Very nice.