I cried in this but thanks I was finding a fic about these two that is sad but i still like them together though... anyway nice fic

Wow. I'm more of a Hayate X Hina fan myself, but this is just depressing. So, terribly depressing. The writing style gave off a powerful impact and I could truly understand the message you're trying to convey. Even though the pace is a little quick, it's okay. I could imagine Nagi doing all this in such a short span of time.

Good job, and good luck for your next story!

This is a good fic... Sure it's depressing but I almost could see it ending up like this. Personally I used to hAte the nagiXhayate paring, but after rewatching the series I have come to adore it. I just hope he ends up with someone... I hate when they end it with everyone being alone... PERSONALLY I hope he ends up with Izumi, Nagi, or Hina. Haha just have to keep watching.

so sad,poor nagi

SMH... poor Nagi I feel a great deal of sympathy for her... Anyway nice one shot