I must say I enjoyed the earlier chapters than with the twins. I liked young-Once-ler and Marie more.

awwww god come here litte dude I am so sorry your famly sucks ass ok now nanna gonna gets some shitzs down punchs izzabela than gives her a big sacrcausm wiplashing then says bye arshlock :) i hate her and I am just sooooo sad for litte dude I ma be your adopted big sis kay good story I am just so sad

This is a great story! I loved it! You haven't updated in a long time...but you totally should!

I hope you haven't given up on the story yet. It's too good to give up on. I really hope that you update it soon. Can't wait for more!

Two words update soon please desperate to find out what happens net!

Phew! It's great that she's free, but can she be fixed? And what has happened to Marie?

But I LoVeD your chappie! They story is so sad! I almost cried. :')
Reviewing from my phone, so this won't be too long.
Will Once and Chloe ever get Natty back?!
I HAvE to know!
:3
OS

Ooooooo! Please don't leave us hanging! This chapter sure had a lot of emotions in it, happy, sad, and insane. Gosh, locking them up in an asylum beacause they were related to Once-ler is... brutal. Glad that thee girls are out, now what about Marie? *gulps* Remember when you said that this fanfiction would end bittersweet because of "Romance That Remains Forever" would end happily (I think thats what you said), please tell me that this doesn't mean that Marie will end up being dead in this story! But, I think that Natalie sticking up for her dad (drunk or not) was nice.

You wrote about one of my favorite topics: mistreatment of insane asylum patients. While I read this I was so scare that there was going to be a lobotomy done on one of the girls. But I breathed a sigh of relief when nothing like that occurred. Stuff like this always rubs me the wrong way.

Drunk people can be quite amusing or they're not. I've had to deal with my fair share of drunkards. You did quite find with how Natalie acted.

You kept everything very intense and made me interested. Good work dearie. :)

Happy you were able to update this.

BLC

30 pages?
That has got to be the longest chapter I have never heard!
I was also wondering what was going on with the twins...
Now I'm wondering if their mother will come into the picture!
I hope she didn't die! D:

YES! YES! YES! I LOVE THISSSSSSSS! THIS IS A AMAZINGLY AWE-INSPIRING GREATLY LOVELY FANFIC!

Cool. This is getting really interesting. Keep up the good work, I'm glad you updated :)

Holy Crap! Longest update ever! Keep up the good work!

Hey, I love your story. I hope you continue it soon because it kills me not knowing what happens next. Keep up the fantastic work :)

I've read the story so many times, but I had to read it again. Chapter 22 is my favorite. I am literally drowning in all of the fluffyness and mushyness! Eeeeepppppp! Once-ler is so sweet!