Another great chapter!

Good work that man! Been looking forward to this for a while, as usual you didn't disappoint! Looks like it's about to hit the fan! I shall look forward to seeing how it all plays out! :D

Good update

Excellent update, glad to see things coming to a boil.

Another great addition to your story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Just got caught up with chapters 1-6.
Keep up the good work and looking forward to reading more.

Great chapter!

good chapter. Found an error.

Colonel Krulak," Brannigan said to his second-in-command, "I want the every Marine in the regiment who was not injured, ready to deploy within half an hour."

think you want this "I want every Marine etc etc :D

monbade

Another great addition to your story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Another great addition to your story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great writing...

I like. Your dialogue has improved since the last book, but I think you could still work on your prose a little more. Try to describe things like how the characters feel them, not like how an outside observer would. Example:

Original text: They were about to turn the corner when they felt a large, deafening explosion from inside the conference room. The shockwave from the blast sent the shrapnel-like splinters down the hallway causing further human harm. The four members of the Quorum were thrown to the deck and managed to avoid being injured but the fall to the floor was so violent they were knocked unconscious. All around them was damage unimaginable on a ship such as the Olympica.

New Version: They were about to turn the corner when an explosion ripped through the conference room. The shockwave continued through the Olympica, creating a cloud of shrapnel that eviscerated flesh and bone. The quorum members were blown off their feet. Incredibly the shrapnel missed them but they connected with the remaining walls with enough force to lose consciousness. Around them fires broke out and people bled int he gutted Olympica.

just a suggestion, sorry if I'm sounding too forceful in it.

There's one other minor thing: Aurelia Gilliam is absolutely useless. She is not a threat, never was, and in my opinion it would make the overall story easier to follow and faster moving if she wasn't a part of it. If you got something up your sleeve for her, I really hope its good.

8/10 keep writing.

USN

Another great addition to your story. I can't wait to see where the story leads next. Keep up the great work. Hope to find out what really happened to Admiral Tolan soon.

great chapter. but what about the missing Battlestar, the debries they found are not enough for a battlestar so we know they survived but where are they, questions and more questions but little answers.

Waiting for more

monbade

I have been following this line since it was started and always wait for the next one. Keep up the writing!

I just spent the last day or so reading through the Battlestar Victorious stories and I have to confess: you have me hook.