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| Hieiko 2005-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseI've been trying to think of how exactly that proposal came about, and this seems to be the way it would have been. |
| marielise 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abusewoow, this is so good :) it might actually have happened like this :-) I like it how you explore the conflict of Padmé's rational and emotional sides... |
| Picture Girl 2005-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh! I am melting. I am not much for shippy, but this was wonderful. |
| x-woman1 2004-02-15 ch 1, | abusereally sweet story. it's sad knowing what happens to them, though... |
| Maria11 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuse"Is such a kiss a customary greeting among the Naboo, Senator?" - Love this line I do! Great story! |
| Princess-Aiel 2003-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI am still in awe, wow, I wish I could just re-shoot Episode II and shove this in there, you've done a brilliant job and you should be appluded, well done! |
| Midnight's Trinity 2003-05-15 ch 1, | abuseAww that was sweet. And Ani telling Obi-Wan he loves him...that was cute. Nice job. |
| Trinity Day 2002-06-27 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! Absolutely and utterly magnificent. I am a huge fan - you're one of my favourite SW writers of all times, even if I haven't been the best reader and reviewed. I loved this story. It was a perfect continuation of the movie and it made my week to read it. I love the interaction between Anakin and Padme. You have the characterization just right for both of them, from Anakin's suicidal inclinations before redemption from Padme to Padme's desperate struggle - and failure - to remain rational. I also loved the scene between Obi-Wan and Anakin, particularly the former's inability to deal with the relationship between the two of them. (Poor Ani! "Thank you" isn't much of a response when you tell your father figure that you love him, is it?) Overall, as I've already said, this was a fantastic fic. Bravo! (PS - Thanks for the line about Padme's infected scratches; all that rolling around in the sand can't have been good for them!) |
| pokey 2002-06-12 ch 1, | abuseWonderful, this is the best of the Ani/Ami proposal stories that I have read. And I like the title, it make me think of 'come what may' from Moulin Rouge which always reminded me of Ani and Padme. Beautiful story, I loved it. I tried to review yesterday and it wouldn't let me, thats so annoying. |
| Spring's Rose 2002-06-12 ch 1, | abuseAwww! This is so cute! Can you please make a sequel? Please! |
| Miss Becky 2002-06-12 ch 1, | abuseWell done! True to the characters, and I could see all this happening. |
| Bex 2002-06-12 ch 1, | abuseNice scenes; just be careful about 'telling instead of showing' (that being the fine line anyone writing has to walk)... Just a very minor quibble, though; heck, I thought Lucas did too much of that at times in the recent movie, too, so... ^.^ Over-all, though, a fine job on this 'missing scene' fic... |
| ffjunkie1 2002-06-12 ch 1, | abuseGood Lord, you have talent. I have to say, this is by far the best Anakin/Padmé fic I have read, and I thank you for posting it on ff.net so we can all read it. Honestly, the way you write... and how you can peg the character's personalities so perfectly is wonderful. I applaud your style and the way you describe things, people, their feelings.. it's great. Please, continue writing, and congratulations on your work! |
| intoxiquekated 2002-06-12 ch 1, | abusePOWER!!! Wonderful story. Padmé and Anakin... whoohoo!!! You really have a knack for this. |
| rinabina 2002-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abusewoooow....that was amazingly good. i'm so serious. i just saw the movie again today..erm...we'll leave the number out of it, but these two sound exactly in character. this is a wonderful story. thank you very much for this moment of fluffy romance that is completely well written! |