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manakinb2
2009-06-26 . chapter 1
Love it!
Admiral Lily
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
Excellent. I've often wondered how they came to the decision to marry. You did well.
Vader's Fallen Angel
2008-10-04 . chapter 1
*Big Smile*

I loves the entire thing, but I must say the ending was my favorite. Anakin refusing to be Padme's lover and them heading to the lake together. Very nice.

VFA
Hieiko
2005-08-12 . chapter 1
I've been trying to think of how exactly that proposal came about, and this seems to be the way it would have been.
LachesisBenton
2005-06-21 . chapter 1
woow, this is so good :)
it might actually have happened like this :-)
I like it how you explore the conflict of Padmé's rational and emotional sides...
Picture Girl
2005-03-15 . chapter 1
Oh! I am melting. I am not much for shippy, but this was wonderful.
x-woman1
2004-02-15 . chapter 1
really sweet story. it's sad knowing what happens to them, though...
Maria11
2003-09-11 . chapter 1
"Is such a kiss a customary greeting among the Naboo, Senator?" - Love this line I do! Great story!
Princess-Aiel
2003-05-21 . chapter 1
I am still in awe, wow, I wish I could just re-shoot Episode II and shove this in there, you've done a brilliant job and you should be appluded, well done!
Midnight's Trinity
2003-05-15 . chapter 1
Aww that was sweet. And Ani telling Obi-Wan he loves him...that was cute. Nice job.
Trinity Day
2002-06-27 . chapter 1
Wonderful! Absolutely and utterly magnificent. I am a huge fan - you're one of my favourite SW writers of all times, even if I haven't been the best reader and reviewed. I loved this story. It was a perfect continuation of the movie and it made my week to read it. I love the interaction between Anakin and Padme. You have the characterization just right for both of them, from Anakin's suicidal inclinations before redemption from Padme to Padme's desperate struggle - and failure - to remain rational. I also loved the scene between Obi-Wan and Anakin, particularly the former's inability to deal with the relationship between the two of them. (Poor Ani! "Thank you" isn't much of a response when you tell your father figure that you love him, is it?) Overall, as I've already said, this was a fantastic fic. Bravo! (PS - Thanks for the line about Padme's infected scratches; all that rolling around in the sand can't have been good for them!)
pokey
2002-06-12 . chapter 1
Wonderful, this is the best of the Ani/Ami proposal stories that I have read. And I like the title, it make me think of 'come what may' from Moulin Rouge which always reminded me of Ani and Padme. Beautiful story, I loved it. I tried to review yesterday and it wouldn't let me, thats so annoying.
Spring's Rose
2002-06-12 . chapter 1
Awww! This is so cute! Can you please make a sequel? Please!
Miss Becky
2002-06-12 . chapter 1
Well done! True to the characters, and I could see all this happening.
Bex
2002-06-12 . chapter 1
Nice scenes; just be careful about 'telling instead of showing' (that being the fine line anyone writing has to walk)... Just a very minor quibble, though; heck, I thought Lucas did too much of that at times in the recent movie, too, so... ^.^

Over-all, though, a fine job on this 'missing scene' fic...
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