|Reviews for Break Point|
| xxreading-addictxx 4/27/13 . chapter 5
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! :)
| SunnyDorangejuice 12/30/12 . chapter 5
...you have awesome OC characters. They're just...wow. They're emotions and whatnot are always so...intense. Dude, how the heck do you DO that?
| Rajsa 9/7/12 . chapter 5
hehe xD this is very good :P Funny and just very good
| akaki 9/1/12 . chapter 5
This is a good read. I kinda love how the Yukimura that I imagined is not like the Yukimura in your story, he's a very blunt one here, and mean. It's refreshing because most stories I've read portrayed Yukimura as a gentle person, kind, careful with words etc.
Unknowingly, I also took interest of Open, An Autobiography of Andre Agassi. If you didn't mention it, no one would ever dreamed of seeing me reading a sports autobiography, ever. I enjoyed the book, finished it in three days. It's not boring at all, surprisingly.
I can see the similarity of Anna and Andre, at one point, they were both lost. They hate tennis, but tennis is all they can do. I'm looking forward to how Yukimura will mend this broken Anna. Really, please update soon. Thank you.
| Guest 8/18/12 . chapter 5
| mintish 7/28/12 . chapter 5
ugh okay I read this when you updated and told myself that I would review later but laziness struck and I never did and I'm still feeling lazy AHAHAHA...u_u well I'm just reviewing now or else I'll end up forgetting again. This is a lovely chapter, as usual, and I like how Anna and Yukimura are slowly bonding 8) a serious match between them would be super cool.
Sorry for the short review, hopefully next time I'll be less lazy ; o ; thanks for the chapter!
| unknown player 7/24/12 . chapter 5
"You know what? Fuck you." - most epic line I have ever read adrressed to THE Yukimura Seiichi here in
oh my gahh
i love your OC, Anna. she's so... believable, and unique out of all the oc stories i've read. she's so... fragile she's adorable lol when she's not being uhm mentally disturbed, she can say the funniest of things lol
and your portrayal of Seiichi. I mean, we all know he's not perfect and all, but this fic shows a totally different side of him.
ugh everything is just so adorable. siigh and your writing style is reader-friendly too.
definitely going to my fave list!
| FAN-atic-ionary 7/20/12 . chapter 5
GAWD... wat to do posses that I don't? This has been an absolutely awesome chapter ,and Im really happy with the progession of Anna comeback and more insight of Yukimura's personality that this chapter really contains a lot of hidden info (which is great!) I have been really looking forwards to this episode so imagine how happy I am when u updated :)
Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting :)
| sleepdeprived91 7/20/12 . chapter 5
ohohohoho... surprisingly, the reason i'm looking forward to the next chapter is not because i want to see how they will progress (in romance)... i'm looking forward to see if yukimura can help her.. ha
| skidney 7/20/12 . chapter 5
| koori no hime 7/20/12 . chapter 5
Yipee! New chapter. You do update fast. I really hope the magic stays longer.. may the force be with you and may the odds be ever in your favor and some other encouraging trite line from some famous movie/book.. yeah.. Anyway, I know it's weird but the first part made me laugh. Well, not the whole conversation.. Just the last part. She really had the audacity to say that to yukimura. And the part when yanagi said that there's a 1% chance that yukimura will even consider killing her made me grin like an idiot. Hihi.. i know that wouldn't have comforted me.. That was just way too freaky.. at least she didn't fly to canada or to some other country, say morocco.. And sayoko made a cameo. I kinda missed her.. Too bad there wasn't any tennis on the moon. Though i think if the lead in this story is atobe that would've been the first scene. I think tennis in alaska is just as good, though.. Anyway, good luck with the next chapter. I'm really excited to see how their tennis sessions will progress :)
P.S: I also liked the golf thing. I think it's an intresting sport, golf. Is it any fun? Though, i don't have a dad to play it with.. But, yeah.. That doesn't matter. At least there no one out to criticize my awful game :)
| Guest 7/19/12 . chapter 5
YOU USED ONE OF MY FAVORITE SONGS IN THE WORLD. And it really fits this story.
Aaaaah, she's affecting Yukimura even more. Silly, Yukimura, that means you find her interesting.
ANNA, TOO. They're getting in each others' heads! Why that makes me so happy, I don't know. Shipping feelings I guess...
This chapter was nice. The end made me smile. They're slowly getting there!
Keep up the good work, from one in-coming college student to another!
| Hao'sAnjul 7/19/12 . chapter 5
Development! They went from desperate to irritated to angry to panic to confused to happy. Geez how can some one feel all of that within 24 hours and not explode? ;D
As always, nicely written chapter.
(and tell me about it, college stuff is a pain in the butt, especially when you move to different apartments! What year are you, if you don't mind me asking.)
| skyfire.k-rainwhisper.s 7/19/12 . chapter 5
Hehe I still loove this chap, regardless of how many time you edited it :D I actually laughed out loud during that whole bit with Anna and Yukimura laughing together. I think I was holding my breath while reading the first half of this chap as well...So, I'd like to thank you for making this another enjoyable chap:D
| Pweety Stars 7/19/12 . chapter 5
OMG! NIOU AND SAYOKO MOMENT! SQUEEEEE! And MAJOR progress between Anna and Yukimura...so major...that im gonna faint! Very, very, very, anticipating the next chappie.
PS: UPDATE SOOOOOOON