|Reviews for Break Point|
| Pweety Stars 7/19/12 . chapter 5
OMG! NIOU AND SAYOKO MOMENT! SQUEEEEE! And MAJOR progress between Anna and Yukimura...so major...that im gonna faint! Very, very, very, anticipating the next chappie.
PS: UPDATE SOOOOOOON
| MissMeep 7/19/12 . chapter 5
LOL. Yukimura doesn't like to dirty his hands eh? I LOVE your interpretation of Yukimura, he's actually human in your stories! Bonding time for Anna and Mura... Wonder how many times she can make Yukimura lose his temper? O.o Amazing job, like always :)
| asobi seksu 7/19/12 . chapter 5
I started mentally clapping for Anna when she dropped the f-bomb. I love her so much D: AND I CAN TOTES SEE THEM MARRIED ALREADY. I MEAN COME ON THEY ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER.
And have I mentioned how much I love your characterization of Yukimura? You capture the perfection and imperfection and godliness and mortality of him. He's just amazing in this chapter. The part where he points out there are holes in the racket I was like asdfsafdlajkalfdsjal;kfd squeeeee.
Also, I laughed at what Renji said. It's such a Renji-ish thing to say.
Finally, I'm kinda not a fan of the stuttering part. It's a little distracting, but hey, it's just a tiny thing that I can overlook since the rest of the story is AMAZINGSAUCE and uh yep.
I haven't gone shopping for my dorm or anything, but the only thing I've bought is a Macbook Pro. Figures. lol
| Heartnett 7/19/12 . chapter 5
Love this sooo so much! I didn't see any huge mistakes, person who doesn't edit? I've never played golf - ur probably better than me :P Anyway, I feel the need to say this again so i'm going to say... type this again this time in caps and i'll add something at the end - look forward to it!
LOVE THIS SOOOOO SOOOOO MUCH YOU BETTER WRITE MORE OR ELSE SOMEONE IS GOING TO DIE - AND THAT SOMEONE WON'T BE ME!
| Pweety Stars 7/19/12 . chapter 4
Did i review this? I dont think so...
Anyways...whoa. I just wanted to kno, why does Anna suck so much now in tennis? And Yukimura! Going to her in the end! And Niou! Popping outta nowhere! (But i still like him)
Super fast updates. I didnt go on for a week and BA-BAM! 2 Break Point chappies! Whoa.
On a side note; loving Anna more and more.
On another side note; UPDATE 250 DS! I kno im pushy...but i wanna read about Niou and sayoko's adventure! (Whines...)
Anyways...update soon on wutever...im going off to read the next chappie
| Makkaka 7/19/12 . chapter 5
Poor Anna QAQ/ Totally feeling the angst (which I love by the way being the masochist that I am but moving on-), ouch, I'd never be able to live that down, falling os far ;_; ... But... It feels as though she's subconsciously playing badly because she doesn't want to deal with the fame and the tournaments... Like she just wants to play... Or am I reading too deep into this OTL
| Hao'sAnjul 7/16/12 . chapter 4
Glad to see that the story is progressing to such an important turning point- Yuki is (hopefully) going to help her play! That means bonding time!
Again, I enjoyed the layout and appreciate your attention to correct grammar. Keep writing and I hope to see the next chapter out soon!
| kuroikuu 7/15/12 . chapter 4
I sure didn't expect this when I stumbled upon this. I've never read anything quite like this before and its a good change from the usual fluffiness written in other PoT/OC stories. I'm really liking your character, she's not as Mary Sueish as I would have expected and I do believe she's a character that many of us could relate to, since we all go through these struggles one way or another. I also like your characterization of Yukimura so far, though a bit vague on his personality. Keep up the good work. I look forward for the next chapter.
| FAN-atic-ionary 7/15/12 . chapter 4
OMGAWD! This chapter is absolutely awesome and totally smashed all of my expectations :)) And you updated so fast!
I love how the story is progressing in the way that Anna is starting to get control and a grip on her lifestyle finally and that Yukimura is helping her do so (was to be expected since it was a YukimuraOC pairing but still) and he is just being... gawd- kinda wish I was in her place :) Love the way you write your OCs and I hope that you can like... update within a week again!
I'm sure that will make a billion ppl happy- and you deserve SOOOO much more reviews and favs and follows so keep on writing
| emliy02 7/15/12 . chapter 4
Honestly, I feel like you deserve so many more favs and reviews from people than you have because your writings are just that good! Haha. I wonder how long it'll be before someone realizes that the two are spending quite a nice bit of time with each other. ;) But as always you portrayed Anna's character so well. I feel like your characterizations of the characters are just works of art. Again I'm wowed by them. And such speedy updates! Love!
| mintish 7/14/12 . chapter 4
- ahhh I like how Anna's acknowledging that she can't blame Yukimura!
- "When had he gotten old?" ooooh I like this. So she /hasn't/ been around her parents enough. Makes me wonder if they ever look at her and think "when did she grow up?" Or maybe they'll think this towards the end, when she's become more sure of herself
- okay Ishii-sensei is annoying sajkfleighaskg GO AWAY NO ONE LIKES YOU omg "Doesn't she break your heart?" WHY WOULD YOU SAY SOMETHING LIKE THIS AND SMILE I can hear her patronizing tone ugh
- love the Anna/Yukimura conversation 8) they're slowly coming to an understanding! and bonding! and HAHAHA THEY MADE OUT THE END if only all stories could end that easily and happily
- it'd be cool if Anna could help Yukimura with something like how he'll help her with her tennis. He's lacking in people skills and Anna's aren't great either but I'm betting she's more compassionate than him so maybe that could rub off on him a bit? hahaha idk man
- I am excited about this story ahhhhhh
ok thanks for the quick update, I look forward to the next 8D
| Heartnett 7/14/12 . chapter 4
More. And now!
| asobi seksu 7/14/12 . chapter 4
"And then he was like sure no problem, and then they made out. The end."
Um just sayin', I'd be so okay with that. Although I don't know what Anna looks like - in my head, she's super pretty but unconscious of it. You've stated that she's a thoughtful person, so she's got those kind of eyes as well. Of course, I bet she's got a smokin' gorgeous body, super toned, great legs, and is taller then most girls.
I think this could be a really good Rikkai!girls team fic if you fleshed out all your OCs one by one. And I just adore how Anna and Seiichi are bonding over tennis - lots of writer, especially me, like to skip over those parts since we either a) don't play tennis or b) too lazy to put time into writing good tennis scenes.
I'm glad that you're updating like the wind, though. For me, I'm getting so picky about what I put down - I have five or six drafts of my next chapter, and it's just a pain in the ass. I really enjoy the story.
| koori no hime 7/14/12 . chapter 4
Ooohhh.. so that's why I had a feeling I'll be reading something good tonight, well, at least it's nighttime where I'm from. :) Nosy teachers can be really annoying so I can kinda relate to Yukimura in this chapter. Ishii-sensei kinda reminded me of a teacher I had in high school. Pretty annoying. Anyway, I think it's kinda cool that miyamoto wants to help in 'rebuilding', for the lack of a better term, Anna. It's good that she's really concerned, I think, and she's not just using her for show or intimadation, if that would've even worked. Oh and finally, I think that Yukimura and Anna's conversations in this chapter are a lot less tense compared to the others. So, yeah, great chapter. Hope the quick updates lasts longer ;D
| invisible-gurl 7/14/12 . chapter 4
lmao i loved that little comment at the bottom XD i actually thought you ended the fic like that for an insane moment there... then i saw the page break XD hahaha great job and plz update soon