You have written some of the best dialogue that I've read. I can easily imagine the words sounding like the characters are speaking them. You definitely have their word choice down. Keep up the great work.

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I think it was kind of fast pace, and u were definitely right about it being au. I usually don't like au stories on principle, but this is pretty funny. I don't know if funny is what u were going for but I laughed hard when julie had to run steps. Your chapter length is quite impressive. I'm jealous lol. Neways I think this has real potential (sp?) Im not going to be able to read the next two ch. Now but ill do so soon, and ill definetly review.3 light

Waking up to find a new chapter of this story started my morning off right! Wow i cant wait to see where this whole shane drama go's! Keep up the amazing work i cant wait to read more! I hope you update soon!

Drama, Drama! I really like that Tim and Smash kind of feel protective over Julie and that you didn't make them outrageously stupid, I really dislike Shane (but whats a good story without an antagonist?) and I definitely can't wait for the sassiness to come! Really loving it so far

I really like this story! I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm sure it will be a great one!

I'm really loving this story, it's very different from all the others out there, just can't wait for the next chap!

Wow i love this story and i cant wait to read more! I hope you update soon! Julie as a bad girl i like it! Oh and I just happen to think The Gong of Doom is an idiot first and second would not know a good story if if i slapped him right across the face! But honestly keep up the great work on the story!

I like it alot and want to read more please continue!

Pretty awsome! Can't wait to see how they react.

Great story can't wait for an update!