Cool fic so far.

Hey! Your stories are so awesome! It also gave me an idea. I would like to ask your permission to kinda copy the concept of the story and mash it up with BlackWood Castle by AngeloftheMorning. I'm a girl who respects copyright rights and laws, so email me at to let me know what you think.

I hope you're happy making me review four times and stay up until 5:30 AM just to finish this thing. God, I'm gonna be tired tomorrow. The ending was a little short, but I did like it. Lovely story. I really felt the panic and chaos and fluff.

"Don't you just wish Travis would make them some tea and biscuits and warm them by the fireplace instead of all this?"

That would make an awesome crack!fic, actually.

"Which reinforced the notion that fueling those feelings for her were dangerous and he shouldn't think of her that way."
Me: (repeatedly hit myself on the head with my stuffed springer spaniel)

And, dang, that was a heartbreaking chapter.

Wait… but earlier in the story, she and him HAD seen each other often with the ice cream and the Papa and the Napoleon and… I'm thinking too much. This story is too interesting. I NEED SLEEP!

I honestly love this fic! Brilliant job!

Oooh, this is getting interesting! :D

First of all, I laughed at that fantastic story that the black-out kid had about Ariadne, it was funny, especially when I imagined it in my head. :D

Secondly, I'm pretty sure there's something not right, either... Well, at least if Miss/Mrs./Ms. Bourgeois wakes up, she'll have all those pretty flowers to look at. :)

I really liked this chapter, the parts with Arthur and Ariadne were nice, and I can already see some of Arthur's conflicted feelings cropping up. :)

Nicely written story so far, I'm enjoying it. And there is a lot of material to get through, so I will get started on those other chapters. :) I think my favorite part was when Arthur was champing at the bit to do something about that pilot. It was amusing.

Wow good writing in this chapter. That was intense!

I love your stories! The parts that go back in time are my favorite :) and how Arthur is so stubbornly not in love with her even though everyone knows he is :) I'm glad this story is done so I don't ave to wait for New chapters :)

I can't put exactly what I want to say in words or it would take up way to many characters so I'll settle for telling you simply
This was amazing, thank you.
-Elle

Fantastic ending, a bit rushed I think. I would have loved an extended version of Arthur and Ariadne getting sweet on the last part. :P