I had already read this one (I'm luvthementalist on twitter) but it was even better the second time around!
I loved how you explored Jane's thoughts while he was in jail, something I haven't found anywhere else.
Really enjoyed it and can't wait for the other one ;)

I said it before to you and I'll say it again, this piece is absolutely amazing. You really have Jane down here and I will forever love the "man of many faces" concept, because it seriously is something that needs to be focused on. The hypnotism highly amused me, just so you know. :D However, hypnotism in anything I read makes it even more amazing! :D Excellent job, truly!

Already commented on LJ, but I wanted to reiterate it here. I think this is such a unique 4x24 episode tag - something that nobody else has actually bothered to focus on. I'm glad you got the chance to write this.