awwwww

So romantic!

Are they going to have sex or not?!

The sun kissing the sea. THE SUN KISSING THE SEA. That's probably the most romantic and cutest thing I've ever heard. Looks like Will and Percy enjoyed playing doctor C;

Cute

Soo freaking sweet! :-D I love Will 3

I love the whole tenderness thing goin on! Very nice work.

I love it! This is such a cute couple and a really sweet creative story! :3

awe too cute

That was cute.

So, apparently I have to review these stories of yours due to a lack of motivational...whatever. So this is me being all motivational and sh*t. (and also reviewing)
First, sunsets will always have me thinking about Will and Percy kissing.
Second, this story was fluffy with a hint of...lime? Yea we'll go with lime.
Third, there are a few typos here and there. lol
Okay, that was me reviewing. Now this is me being motivational!
You should continue writing, for you have brilliant ideas that need to be put on paper. And if that doesn't happen, I will be forced to threaten you with a a horribly-written-makes-my-eyes-bleed-but-I-can't-h elp-but laugh-and-cry-at-the-same-time story. And you don't even wanna know HOW I discovered it. Threats are motivational right?
I'm not sure if I should fit in my life story here. It's a bit long XD

I really love all your Will/Percy stories just as musch as Nico/Percy. Wish you'd make more of them

This is really good! I didn't really think a Will/Percy would work...but you just changed my mind.

i still love your stories but this one could use more back story or a POV chanege from the youe the face in my dreams part go to Will's or 3rd person.
I still love it but thats just what i think it probuly of made it more fluffy

NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWW. adowabru (adorable in broken english)