|Reviews for Around The Mountain|
| Razer Athane 7/4/12 . chapter 1
I HAD NO IDEA YOU CHANGED YOUR FUCKING NAME. I'm so sorry for getting to this late DX
‘The Arizonian sun sets in sulfur skies and Michelle knows, yes, she is home.’ – This is lovely!
‘If Michelle had to compare her to an animal, it would be a dewy eyed doe, far too Bambi for the jaws of the wild coyotes.’ – This really stood out. Never thought of her that way.
‘You might as well forget all your fancy pants university boys. If he makes you laugh, then you're as good as gone, love.’ – Yessss XD
"Really? All good stuff, I hope." – YES. Also can I just say more ‘yes’ at Julia/Bob XD?
Its so refreshing to read well written work, it honestly is. –keeps reading-
"My foot is on your ass is gonna be essential soon," – dun dun DUUUN.
"Did he choose this, pre-tell?" – LOL
"He dresses like a gimp." – First I thought of Gimp, the program… Then I realised what you were saying XD
‘She imagines Paul to be retired by now but she googles his name on Julia's old slow laptop and sees he is still in competition, still top of his game.’ – This made me grin. I don’t know why. XD
This was really nice. Well done, as always, and welcome back :3