I really liked this! It was sad yet refreshing that they didn't end up together. I really like how you always keep some things unsettled, and often avoid the cliche endings. Could you PLEASE put Lost in Translation back up again? It's honestly the best fanfiction I've ever read. It's so well-written and heartbreakingly beautiful and I love the way you portrayed Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. I really miss reading it!

"So what if it felt like his heart had just shriveled to the size of a pea? No big deal." That's Sasuke. Through and through. You are a great author. I could see the scenes clearly; the descriptions seemed almost real. It's amazing how you managed so much angst into this AU story where their world was more or less perfect in a sense of no fratricide etc AND made it believable. Thanks for writing. Please keep writing.

Greetings
Flayne

Hi just read ur story have u thought about adding to it? Like maybe show their life after a couple of years, they could be together or find live in someone else. Either way where they are happy with one another or other people. Please? Gret fic.

Ohmygosh. dat ending. I am crying right now *sniff sniff*

My feels aside, I think that was very well written. Good characterisation *thumbs up!*

Love...often leaves people behind. Even if one doesn't intend on doing so.

I love it. It was realistic and the sadness, the reactions, the words, everything worked just right. I teared up at the end probably because I loved your Sasuke so much. Sure Naruto was great as well but Sasuke was amazing in this.

Well done.

Two thumbs up with this :)

Sequel, please? Maybe about Naruto's feeling towards Sasuke later coz I really couldn't stand it was ended like this. However, you did good for this story becoz reality isn't some sorta scenario where the ending is wrap up good. Nice.
Regards,
Kyou Kionkitchee.

this is really heartbreaking. please continue.

It was so good that I as crying my eyes out in the ending. So amazing.

Please tell me i am not the only person who has tears in her eyes after reading this!
This story (and most of your other stories) just make me wish they'd never end. My heart yearns so much for more that I can't even put in words. Be it, "It started over coffee" or this one or any other, I love your Sasuke and Naruto and your flair for dialog and romance to a point past bearing. Hell, i can wax poetic right this moment! I am so emotionally charged after reading this, its not even funny.
As irrational as this may sound, tell me you'll give this a sequel where Sasuke actually has a chance to change Naruto's mind? Please? Just tie every loose string up in a pretty bow just like all the romantic comedies Naruto acts in (in this fic) and give it to me?

This has got to be one of the saddest things I've ever read *sniff* poor sasuke he just needs some luvin'

I typed out about 5 different lines to start this review and deleted every single one, i just didn't know how to express my need to take a minute or two to just cry (only a little) while staring at the SasuNaru poster in my room. It's as a wind down to sniffles that I'm able to say that in the end, I wasn't all that surprised that this is how it ended. I'm hurt I suppose, but not surprised. I saw this coming from chapter 3, right around when the fog started to roll in. I'm not too sure if it was, but I felt like the fog and the rain were a metaphor of sorts, or at a very accurate use of pathetic fallacy, or both. I can't even bring myself to analyze it too much at the moment.

Anyways, I loved this story. I don't think I had pointed it out in any other chapter, but you always write so beautifully. I don't know how to describe your writing style other than perfect; characters, language, setting, plot, everything is flawless. I don't know how you manage to do it, but your stories blow me away every single time I read them. I don't know how to segway into an ending here so I'm just going to finish off by saying once again that you're phenomenal and I'm sorry for not leaving a longer review but this story is still amazing. Thank you for sharing this with everyone, it was amazing :)

I don't know how you do it but you always manage to make me love these two even more than I already do, it should be almost unnatural how much I feel for them oh my goodness. But I really love their whole relationship, and it's really cute and funny how Sasuke reacts to the 'outsiders' (i guess would be the word for it?) who are a part of Naruto's life.

There are a few parts that were my favourite in this chapter, one being when they got out of the car at the restaurant and Naruto said they were going on a date. He's so precious I love it :) But the part I loved the most had to be the ending in the kitchen; when Sasuke wrapped his arms around Naruto I think i just about melted. It was perfect. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to read the next chapter now :)

Wow. Woooooow. I'm loving this so far. I really like the setup for this story and I'm so excited to read the other chapters, just thought I would leave a small note before I go ahead and do that.

Oh and I don't know if I've pointed this out but I love that Sasuke is the one pursuing Naruto, it's a very refreshing twist from the canon. Aaaaanyways, I'm going to go ahead and read those other chapters now :)