this is awesome thank you there are so little female Apollo or female Amata fanfics absolutely love yours please continue I give you cookies if you do ;) so bye I await your awesome fanfic :D

by. your waiting fan

Please continue I love the story I will give you any thing olease I AM BEGING HERE want it to continue been waiting forever fell like someone cut off my fav anime so please I AM BEGING i give you cokkies and then will you continue
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when we you continue this please continue this it was really good

I do like where the story is going but its too rushed and not a lot of details. I would like to see how ths plays out.