|Reviews for Wild Boys|
| MilyMB 5/5/13 . chapter 13
omg! update this story asap! you know it's my absolute fav! i hope your doing well and are having some time to relax from school/work! i love your stories so much and i promise i'm back into reviewing and pressuring you into updating! :)
| Kazo Sakamari 4/28/13 . chapter 14
OMFG! I DIDN'T REALIZE YOU UPDATED THIS!
I was just reading it because I was bored and really love this story...and holy shit. I realized there was a chapter that I hadn't read before...and OMG!
Peter now knows.
And shit...peter knows.
I have to say, in your other story, Peter is a likable guy. I really like his character, which is surprising because you know... traitor and all that. But I like him.
I suppose we, as readers haven't really seen that much of him so far, but I just can't decide if I like him here or not. I mean...hiding in the closet and blackmailing people? So not cool.
I think the main reason for it is because, at the current moment Peter is on the other side, like the non Sirius and James side, which makes me automatically not like him because Sirius and James don't like him. I think, once they get around to liking him, that is 'if' they get around to liking him, then I'll probably begin to like him too...until then...well. Let's just say he's not my favorite.
I'm totally cool with Lily knowing, I just love Lily in this, she's brilliant and adorable and perfect for James.
I am interested in learning about what you have planned for Rose...because that will certainly mix things up a bit.
And I do really want at least one scene of Remus/Sirius...there is sooo much sexual tension between them sometimes, in a playful way, but still!
And I love Benjy! L.O.V.E. him!
So...I do realize this review is like...a month late...but I love this story, can't wait until you update again!
(And can't wait to get to see more of Regulus and Sirius!)
Update again soon!
| Seren Blaidd 4/12/13 . chapter 2
It's very good. Think I already said that. I like the way you've written James and Sirius, and the relationship with Reggie
| Seren Blaidd 4/12/13 . chapter 1
Well written and interesting.
| bookworm101 4/6/13 . chapter 14
| WitAngerandBravery 4/3/13 . chapter 14
Oh my God, is it SIRIUS that get's his phone back? I know, I'm psychic. Ah, Peter is such a little shit. I absolutely love this story! I love Regulus and James and Sirius' relationship, they are just too cute. I also like how you've characterized Lily, she's awesome. Just be careful with your grammar, usually it's pretty good, but then there are also a few other bits, like:
'To get him to bring your phone, yes.' James said.
'To get him to bring your phone, yes,' James said. When it's a he said/whispered/exclaimed/whatever, then you put a comma, but when it's an action like he smiled/handed her the phone/sat down/you get the picture, you put a full stop.
Also, when writing he/she said, it should be like this: "We need the phone," he said. the 'he' and 'she' should be a lower case letter.
I can't wait for your next chapter, I'm so excited!
| MilyMB 3/23/13 . chapter 14
Yay! You know this is one of my favorites of yours and you're really breaking them out of Azkaban! :) It makes me so happy that you are going to have the "Marauders" and Lily in the breakout! I also love that you've added Rose to the story, and hopefully she joins in on the breaking out and gets with Sirius!
| Tephiy'sRareWorld 3/20/13 . chapter 14
Well well well. very very interestin. I'm in love with this fic. I love Always-flirty-sirius. And his relationship with adorable Regulus. and of course James. not many "men" hug eachother cuz it's too "gay" but I think that if youre shure with youre sexuality the nothing can change you. As always I want to be with remus, he's sooooooo...*sigh* I like james and sirius but remus it's all what I like in a boy. Smart, quiet, handsome but doesn't have a big head. a little laidback and an almost murder hahahaha forget that last part. what else can I say? I didn't reviewd this chapter I reviewed the whole fic!
Tha's it. Take care.
| hufflepuffloveforever.x 3/11/13 . chapter 14
Amazing ! Can't wait till the next chapter ! Can't wait till Rose talks to them all omg !
This story is so so so awesome!
Lots of love ! Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
| sarah 3/10/13 . chapter 14
love it! can't wait for more!
| laila dreams 2/24/13 . chapter 13
Yesss lily knows! I can't wait to see what peter does, whether he tells them or someone else, maybe snape...
| errew 2/19/13 . chapter 13
Ahh so Lily knows and she wants in! Great chapter loved all the Rose moments and the mentions of Peter spying on them!
| Ellie 2/17/13 . chapter 13
i didnt expect lily to find out! gahh, i love this story! i'm so happy lily knows, now her and james can be together! i'm annoyed peter knows, but then again he is part of the unofficial marauders in this story so...
i have a feeling more people are going to start finding out!
post soon pleaseee!
| Bellsz 2/17/13 . chapter 13
love this fanfic so much! I think its good that lily and peter know, some shit has to go down before they break out XD lily needs to get with james aswell :) haha this fic is honestly one of the best i've read! plllease keep posting!
| Kazo Sakamari 1/28/13 . chapter 12
Awww! I'm so glad you updated, and let me know that you updated! I totally would have missed this if you hadn't told me...
I love the part where James was thinking about all the other inmates and how they didn't really 'know' him. I think that was a really important point. Not only did it emphasis James understanding of other people and his almost...caution of other people, but it showed a lot of how he and Sirius work, and how he and Sirius actually do 'know' each other.
Ah ha! I knew Remus and Lockhart had something going on...you still haven't said what exactly...but there's something...
And Lily and Remus! Oh my, when James finds that out, if he finds that out...wow...Remus will be in for a beating...
I'm thinking Peter knows a bit about the underground yeah? From the way he's listening in on their conversation, and together with the fact that in cannon he was a rat...and you know...rats, sewers all that? That maybe he can draw out a map?
And Rose is finally introduced! I wonder what's going to happen there...
I love the last part, where Sirius is talking about how Rose is scary because she doesn't care about anyone. Because Sirius is genuinely insane, like really actually full blown crazy, but he cares for people so much. He loves James and Regulus more than anything, and it just goes to show that he and Rose are two very different types of crazy, which is important I think.
Thanks for updating and letting me know! I can't wait until you update this again!