|Reviews for Code|
| Starscreamgirl13 11/10/12 . chapter 2
| Starscreamgirl13 11/10/12 . chapter 1
Like it, Em.
| Stilwater Rundeepo 8/30/12 . chapter 12
ugh, Umbara...horrible stuff happened there. Interesting to see this take on it.
So who are these two girls? I'm so anxious to find out more about them.
| Skywalker-Walking the skies 7/15/12 . chapter 10
Okay slightly confused… Who's Rain?
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/15/12 . chapter 10
Holy cramoli. Vein totally kicked that wino's butt. Who's this Rain dude? Keep writing! :-D
| Stilwater Rundeepo 7/15/12 . chapter 9
at last! She is free! I'm so happy for her :D
Was that black-haired guy a clone? Who? Dying to know...!
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/13/12 . chapter 9
Pretty darn good. Yay, Vein's free! Write more. More, more,more!
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/13/12 . chapter 8
Dr. Feinz' assistant has a point; Vein doesn't deserve this kind of treatment from ANYBODY. Dr. Feinz reminds me of Conrad Murray a lot, even though he's in jail. I just wanna strangle him already. :-(
| Stilwater Rundeepo 7/10/12 . chapter 7
wow...what can I say?
Great story, poor girl...hate the doctor probably almost as much as she does!
About now I'm wondering where the story is going - when she's going to escape this nightmare - and see when she takes part in the SW universe. How much longer is this going to go?
Love how you just keep feeding my hunger for more!
| Skywalker-Walking the skies 7/9/12 . chapter 6
I love this story do far. I just love it. The way you right is powerful and captivates the audience.
| Stilwater Rundeepo 7/9/12 . chapter 6
Amazing poem about guilt. We all have it some shape or form *raises hand* and this poem nailed that experience and emotion, right on the head. The ones that hit me hardest were "when I smile, you shake your head; when I love, you pull me back down". Just, wow!
| Stilwater Rundeepo 7/9/12 . chapter 5
Gosh, poor gal. The pieces are beginning to fit for me now, but I'm still very compelled and interested in her story.
I really love your OC so far. She is most-definitely not a Mary-Sue and you are portraying her very well. Before long, though, I'll want to see how she plays into the Star Wars universe and the lives of canon characters. Nevertheless, I like her and her attitude and her willpower, even though it seems like they have no purpose yet. I hope she escapes soon!
| TrekkieSoka 7/8/12 . chapter 5
Becca...u just ruined an important plot point.
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/8/12 . chapter 5
Pretty darn good. Could you please not put in the 'f' word a lot? It's making me uncomfortable. But, Vein lost her troop. If that ever happened to me, I would always think "Dumb guy, dumb guy, dumb guy!"
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/8/12 . chapter 3
Wow. Really creepy with the med notes. I wonder if Dr. Feinz is gonna do something bad to Vein. Please write more!