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   Starscreamgirl13 11/10/12 . chapter 2Legit... |
| Starscreamgirl13 11/10/12 . chapter 1 Like it, Em. |
| Stilwater Rundeepo 8/30/12 . chapter 12 ugh, Umbara...horrible stuff happened there. Interesting to see this take on it. So who are these two girls? I'm so anxious to find out more about them. |
| Skywalker-Walking the skies 7/15/12 . chapter 10 Okay slightly confused… Who's Rain? Update Soon! |
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/15/12 . chapter 10 Holy cramoli. Vein totally kicked that wino's butt. Who's this Rain dude? Keep writing! :-D |
| Stilwater Rundeepo 7/15/12 . chapter 9 at last! She is free! I'm so happy for her :D Was that black-haired guy a clone? Who? Dying to know...! |
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/13/12 . chapter 9 Pretty darn good. Yay, Vein's free! Write more. More, more,more! |
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/13/12 . chapter 8 Dr. Feinz' assistant has a point; Vein doesn't deserve this kind of treatment from ANYBODY. Dr. Feinz reminds me of Conrad Murray a lot, even though he's in jail. I just wanna strangle him already. :-( |
| Stilwater Rundeepo 7/10/12 . chapter 7 wow...what can I say? Great story, poor girl...hate the doctor probably almost as much as she does! About now I'm wondering where the story is going - when she's going to escape this nightmare - and see when she takes part in the SW universe. How much longer is this going to go? Love how you just keep feeding my hunger for more! |
| Skywalker-Walking the skies 7/9/12 . chapter 6 I love this story do far. I just love it. The way you right is powerful and captivates the audience. Update soon! |
| Stilwater Rundeepo 7/9/12 . chapter 6 wow. chilling! Amazing poem about guilt. We all have it some shape or form *raises hand* and this poem nailed that experience and emotion, right on the head. The ones that hit me hardest were "when I smile, you shake your head; when I love, you pull me back down". Just, wow! |
| Stilwater Rundeepo 7/9/12 . chapter 5 Gosh, poor gal. The pieces are beginning to fit for me now, but I'm still very compelled and interested in her story. I really love your OC so far. She is most-definitely not a Mary-Sue and you are portraying her very well. Before long, though, I'll want to see how she plays into the Star Wars universe and the lives of canon characters. Nevertheless, I like her and her attitude and her willpower, even though it seems like they have no purpose yet. I hope she escapes soon! Awesome! |
| TrekkieSoka 7/8/12 . chapter 5 Becca...u just ruined an important plot point. |
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/8/12 . chapter 5 Pretty darn good. Could you please not put in the 'f' word a lot? It's making me uncomfortable. But, Vein lost her troop. If that ever happened to me, I would always think "Dumb guy, dumb guy, dumb guy!" |
| MichaelJacksonFanGirl1996 7/8/12 . chapter 3 Wow. Really creepy with the med notes. I wonder if Dr. Feinz is gonna do something bad to Vein. Please write more! |
