A great story. Very good.

loved it

Nice, nice look. Wow. Bravo!! :D

Wow! Well written, intense, and totally accurate.

All right, I know I'm a little late in my reviewing considering when this was published--but I'm a firm believer in better late than never. This was the first fanfic from you that I ever read, and considering I'm an avid Obi-Wan fan, the impact of your words hit me hard. When you can feel your heart breaking, feel that lump in your throat grow in size with each paragraph that you take it--*that* is when you know you're reading something that was written from the heart. Bravo...you make Master Kenobi, proud. ;)

That is a pretty nifty story...I like it very very much. The descriptions are great and Obi Wan is just...spiffy! Very nice

Awesome. Very nice flow. Very well done. When I finished this I said WoW. Good Job.

I liked this story very much!!

VERY well written. Insightful and touching. I especially liked the ending, almost poetic-very deja vu! Keep writing!

Amazing, wonderful POV piece on Obi-Wan. Very nicely done fic. ^_^

Depressing, yet very good. I loved it. :,)

That was EXCELLENT!!

It showed all the comitments that Obi found himself torn between.

Beautifully written. Keep it up!

oh my gosh.......I don't know if it was meant to do this....but that was so sad1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am near tears now.....I love it, though! cool !!!!!!

Thank you...I'm glad it's been well-received. Part of the inspiration drawn for this was from the death of my own father 6 years ago...the idea that time felt so frozen to me yet all around me, my life was carrying on and yet eventually I caught up to it again, to my "first duty" to live my life. :)

a truely touching peice of work.i found myself reading it over and over again. i look forward to seeing more of your fiction