This is spot on. Personally, The Chief is my favorite (after Max, of course). I giggled at how well you wrote the characters. I agree, I also love how you differentiate Max and Agent 86.

I very much enjoyed reading this one-shot. This is the first Get Smart fic I've read, and I am very impressed. You write very well, and the characterizations are spot-on. Thanks for sharing!

Haha, too cute! :D

Wow. You have Max and the Chief's relationship down so perfectly! I love how you differentiated Max and Agent 86. And you're so right. Max as an individual is rather spoiled, nieve, klutzy and not exactly sharp. But as an agent he is highly successful. Espianage is the one thing he truly understands.

Your description's of Max's expressions were not only spot on but had me laughing my head off! Such a great story.