|Reviews for Coercion|
| HonorLove 1/21/13 . chapter 20
Loved the story! Thank you letting us all see your world of Sentinels & Guides. Looking forward to your next story, whether a sequel or something new.
| Jirel 10/29/12 . chapter 20
Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story, I really love stories that hypothesize a universe full of sentinels and guides. I enjoyed the heck out of it although I have to admit that a small part of me wonders if the young guides being experimented on were saved or not. I saw something about video of the tests run against them but I can't remember if they were saved or not. And I'd love to "see" the Hunt against those who did the experimenting.
| SurvivorCat 10/14/12 . chapter 20
Woohh what a cool story! I really really enjoy it! I wish you write a secuel! Maybe a little high in rating? Or not.. anyway i like it very much your writting is really cool :D
| Connie 9/26/12 . chapter 10
Damn. Poor Blair!
You've really made me care about all the characters. Taggart is lovely. Would that we ALL had our own Joel when life stinks, y'know?
| Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 9
| Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 8
LOL! I'd buy this story if for no other reason than the term "sentinelmental!" Hee! Love it. Great name for a zine, if you ask me.
| Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 5
Tiny quibble: What IS a "saloon car?" NEXT CHAPTER-NOW!
| Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 4
Caught only one typo (though it's quite possible others may exist; I was just so engrossed!). You have Jim "blow threw" some doors (near the end of the page). It should, of course, be "through."
Enough! On to the next chapter! BEG
| Dreamweaver 9/10/12 . chapter 20
Hurrah for happy endings!
| SISTURNICKYAHOO 9/9/12 . chapter 20
THANKS FOR WRITING A REALLY GOOD DIFFERENT STORY ON JIM AND BLAIR. LOVED THAT JIM SAW WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN TO BLAIR THROUGH BLAIR'S EYE VIEW! THANKS FOR WRITING A WELL WRITTEN INTERESTING SENTINEL STORY..!
| Lobo357 9/9/12 . chapter 20
Excellent. Very nice ending for a stressful story. Everyone came out just fine. Can't wait for your next story.
| wendylee 9/9/12 . chapter 20
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing.
| Kathy M 9/7/12 . chapter 19
Wonderful how Jim knew exactly where to shoot, and then what a tender heartwarming scene, nice chapter
| Terry Kay 9/7/12 . chapter 19
Aw, that was a great way to end a lousy week! thank you!
| Dreamweaver3 9/7/12 . chapter 19
Awwwww! *Sniffles* Marvelous! *Sniffles some more*