Loved the story! Thank you letting us all see your world of Sentinels & Guides. Looking forward to your next story, whether a sequel or something new.

Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story, I really love stories that hypothesize a universe full of sentinels and guides. I enjoyed the heck out of it although I have to admit that a small part of me wonders if the young guides being experimented on were saved or not. I saw something about video of the tests run against them but I can't remember if they were saved or not. And I'd love to "see" the Hunt against those who did the experimenting.

Woohh what a cool story! I really really enjoy it! I wish you write a secuel! Maybe a little high in rating? Or not.. anyway i like it very much your writting is really cool :D

Damn. Poor Blair!

You've really made me care about all the characters. Taggart is lovely. Would that we ALL had our own Joel when life stinks, y'know?

Awwwwwwww...

LOL! I'd buy this story if for no other reason than the term "sentinelmental!" Hee! Love it. Great name for a zine, if you ask me.

Tiny quibble: What IS a "saloon car?" NEXT CHAPTER-NOW!

Caught only one typo (though it's quite possible others may exist; I was just so engrossed!). You have Jim "blow threw" some doors (near the end of the page). It should, of course, be "through."

Enough! On to the next chapter! BEG

Hurrah for happy endings!

THANKS FOR WRITING A REALLY GOOD DIFFERENT STORY ON JIM AND BLAIR. LOVED THAT JIM SAW WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN TO BLAIR THROUGH BLAIR'S EYE VIEW! THANKS FOR WRITING A WELL WRITTEN INTERESTING SENTINEL STORY..!

Excellent. Very nice ending for a stressful story. Everyone came out just fine. Can't wait for your next story.

Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing.

Wonderful how Jim knew exactly where to shoot, and then what a tender heartwarming scene, nice chapter
thanks

Aw, that was a great way to end a lousy week! thank you!

Awwwww! *Sniffles* Marvelous! *Sniffles some more*