oh, very good so far! i hope youll continue! hmm, i wonder who the bad guy is...? lol, but knowing isnt always a bad thing, it gives the story some good dramatic irony, cause now WE know who the bad guy is, but the characters do not. unless of course whats his face from this chapter ISNT the bad guy and we're all just supposed to THINK he is. and oh gosh now im going too far in this. lets just say, i really wanna read this. it sounds really good from the summary, and whats this, Becker and Jess are FINALLY gonna kiss! oh my gosh, there were so many times that i was literally screaming at the tv because they needed to kiss and then they didnt! :D

love it carry on please :) cant wait to find out what happens

Vous nous faites voir l'histoire sous un angle totalement original ! Le fils de Burton !
je ne pense pas que, dans la série, on n'est jamais mentionné la famille de Philippe ! c'est une idée géniale ! la vision des gens est totalement erronée pour l'Arc ! j'attends la suite avec impatience pour voir comment vous allez traiter ce sujet !
à bientôt de vous lire!
I hope you understand french, if no tell me I can write with à translator !