|Reviews for Tribulations|
| Guest 4/14/13 . chapter 16
I really enjoyed this story although it was ruined slightly by spelling and grammatical errors.
| Emi-Ly Sway 3/14/13 . chapter 16
it was actually an awesome story. I liked the last chapter especially. I like to imagine their lives with Fuller.
| Ellen-May 1/22/13 . chapter 16
I absolutely loved ur story! And it's always nice to read quite an original story... I think you portrayed their character development extremely well and it seemed very realistic in the way in which they responded to different situations... Thank you for writing a story that I really enjoyed :)
| The Somebody of Nobody 11/3/12 . chapter 16
This story is wonderful. I favorite it!
If you do write a follow-up of Filler raising them, I'll be more than happy to read it.
| Sk8er Chica 8/2/12 . chapter 16
This was a really good end to the story! I'd absolutely love to read a sequel to it. Fuller really doesn't know what he's getting into with the McQuaids, especially trying to keep up with Doug's appetite, lol.
I hope you write Part 2 so I can see how they adjust to their new life! :)
| smileyface 8/1/12 . chapter 16
I loved this! A sequal would be amazing! :)
| Crazy Stairs 7/31/12 . chapter 16
Oh man... You should definitely write a sequel if you're up to it. I could see a whole series about the McQuaid brothers. Too bad you weren't around in the 80's. You could have written to the Jump Street producers and proposed a McQuaid brothers spin off. Of course, Johnny Depp probably wouldn't have wanted to do it... You should write McQuaid brothers books. Their characters had so much potential (even though they were just acts.) It's a shame they couldn't really be explored... But I guess that's what you're doing.
So good job with the story. :) I liked it beginning to end. You did a great job showing how the brothers care about each other and explaining why they have such a rough reputation. It would be interesting to see where they go from here. Would they try to maintain their tough exteriors at school? Would they get back into selling drugs just because people expect them to? Like you said before, old habits die hard.
If you don't want to write a sequel, that's fine too. I don't want to pressure you. But what I am saying is that if you do write one, I'll read it. :)
| Crazy Stairs 7/31/12 . chapter 15
Oh no! Hopefully Fuller's not too mad... I guess I'll find out. Onto chapter 16!
| Onsecondthought 7/31/12 . chapter 15
Aw man! Why'd they go and do that? Just when Fuller was saying he trusted them, they go and do something like that. Dang. Okay...guess I'd better read the next chapter and see if/how they work it out!
| JPsmiles 7/31/12 . chapter 16
I really hope you write more Jumpstreet stories...I enjoyed this one and am sorry it is over! Nice work! :)
| Immortal Bubblewrap 7/31/12 . chapter 16
Well, I gotta say, this was indeed a good ending. I thought you were going to fit them with foster parents and such, which is why I also was kind of skeptical about how the heck you were going to fit that into one chapter. Buuuut I think this was definitely a better ending! :D I reckon Fuller can handle it. He seems to have his head on straight, so he would figure out what to do. Plus he seems to really care about those two :3
So yeah! This ending has my full approval :D (because, you know, clearly fanfictions NEED approval... Note the sarcasm... Don't kill me... (Hey, don't look at me like that. You can never really know whether people can take a joke or not! :P))
Anywhooo... I like the idea of your sort of... sequel fic. Can I call it a sequel fic? Cause technically that's what it would be. I'm going to call it a sequel fic. Er... anyway... The court and adoption process is kind of unnecessary and would be a pain in the butt to write I reckon. Your choice of course though. But... trying to get things pin point accurate just some times doesn't work out. I found that out the hard way unfortunately.
Now I don't know what to do with my life. I'll probably just go and read this one over again xD
Actually... Yeah I'm gonna go do that.
I should stop rambling.
I suck at reviews for when fanfictions are completed.
Okay. I'm gonna go now. (This really was an awesome read! I loved it! :D)
| Megth 7/30/12 . chapter 16
Very well written - enjoyed it very much. A sequel of some sorts about them living with Fuller sounds like a very good idea (as long as there is some Tommy hurt in there somewhere). I kind of like the idea that eventually they will end up cops and at 21 Jump Street. Looking forward to read more from you!
| JPsmiles 7/30/12 . chapter 15
"We didn't know she'd be there," Doug tried to calm his brother, "she's like a fucking ninja... She's everywhere."
Ha! That's a great line!
I'm sad the next chapter will be the last! :(
| Immortal Bubblewrap 7/30/12 . chapter 15
HOLY... This just got intense again. MUST READ MORE! O_O
How the heck are you going to end this one in the next chapter? Ah well, you've got it sorted I bet. Guess I'll just have to wait and see. :D At least you update fast, aye.
Looking foward to the next chapter!
| Upandatem 7/29/12 . chapter 15
What were they thinking? Good chapter. I look forward to the next and will be sad when its over. *sniff*