Daniel's writing with Carolyn de facto way of showing/experiencing life on board ship.

I could feel Daniel's seething jealousy masked by outrage that his female character paint any crewman shirtless. Jane feels like a version of Mrs. Muir two kids, green eyes, strong,independant and creative as well as selfless.

I cannot wait to see where this story goes. I love the banter between these two. :)

This is just wonderful! I hope there will be more. Hee, hee, a lizard! I love it.

This is clever! Witty! A fresh approach! Wow! But a lizard? Seriously, get Chapter 3 up there fast.

Well, my friend there is some nice little banter between the two. I like your idea. No many stories of him telling her stories. I mean there are her dreaming etc but telling a story... good idea. :)

Cute idea, but I take unberage to "type." Carolyn is a writer - she writes a story, she doesn't type a story. A typewriter (or a computer) is merely the instrument she uses to create - the way an artist uses a brush. I hope you write another chapter to DG's story!