i can tell that English is not your first language but you handled it well! A few mistakes here and there. You might want to consider a beta to help you improve. Very good story though, I thought it was neat!

OMFG this is sooooo awesome! great writing it just blends in with the movie :D

ok a little too cheesy when megs asks minion to come back. might want to adjust that oh and u forgot to put a period after "...trying to get away" other wise good job!