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StoppingMotors
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
Scarlet Amaranth
2009-04-01 . chapter 1
omg, that almost made me cry~

Awesome, absolutely loved this fic.
killthwight
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
I LOVED reading this! Wonderful idea, and very well written. Well done!
j.
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
that was really good. loved how true to the characters you were.
lissiechan
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
I loved this story! It´s so emotional and nice. I guess you could call it a true epilogue to the saga. For sure Vegeta and Goku wouldnt be happy about staying in heaven without anything to fight and have their fun. Congrats!
I don't review very often...
2007-06-21 . chapter 1
This was just such a beautifully written, creative story. Its authors like you and works like yours that make me scour the Pit of voles of fanfiction in order to find such gems.
Cees
2007-06-17 . chapter 1
OMG this fanfiction rules ^^
BVpsycho
2007-06-08 . chapter 1
oh my gawd. Did you know that this is one of the best BV fanfiction I've read after a long time? I praise you SO MUCH fr making a fanfic as BEAUTIFUL as this one. Everything was PERFECT as if it BELONGED to the series and every character was decently in, well, character. Best one EVER.
Paris
2007-06-03 . chapter 1
Except for Trunks having nothing but daughters, although I love their names, this was perfect!
May-VeggieGirl1
2006-06-19 . chapter 1
What a delightful one-shot! Very simple, though the time transitions seemed diststeful at first, it was generally consistant in writing style. And the general story was a simple touching one also. Great job!
rocks and glass
2006-04-12 . chapter 1
this is a brilliant story, one of the best that i've read in a long while. well done
chelsea adair
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
THIS IS THE BEST ** ONE-SHOT EVER GOOD JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB!
Dark Hope Assassin
2005-09-25 . chapter 1
Honestly, I don't think I can possibly admire you any more... You've recreated the after-GT continuation so well that it's almost scary... You did such a fine job at writing this fic! You go girl! You rock so much!

I have to say that the end was quite suiting for a Saiya-jin Prince's end rather than the "has died of natural causes" type of Vegeta's End fics. And that's just why I love you that much! You put so much understanding into the characters' feelings, you make a reader feel their emotions and you transfer your reader into the Dragon Ball world like a charm with each following word until they can no longer remember what they were doing before they sat down to read this story. I simply adore and marvell your writing abillity.

All hail, great Sholio-sama... Ruler of all Dragon Ball Z non-AUs... --bows to the groud respectfully--

Yours sincerely,
DHA
Star-of-Chaos
2004-09-24 . chapter 1
Awesome story. :-D
vratsababe
2004-01-31 . chapter 1
This is a totally awesome story! It is very well written. I read it on ur site. I'm gonna go read some more... toodeloo
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