I can't believe that you have so few reviews! This is a great story and I am so glad that I read it. I loved every second of it. Unlike many people you managed to keep everyone very in character. You did a wonderful job.

Wow, that was a really touching story. The characters were in character and I liked you wrote how Vegeta struggled with himself after Bulma died. And I LOVED how the characters didn't give up, even when all of their loved ones were gone. Like with #18. She just took on the job of protcting the world and didn't give in to depression. I really loved that.

-Groovy

wow. fantastic story! I love it! You're a really talented writer! )

Oh! That was such a good story! I was a little hesitant about reading it at first, but now I'm glad I did! You got the presonalities down really well, I can completely imagine Bulma bullying Enma and the Onis like that! And Piccolo as the head of Hell...lol great job! The letters were really good, too, I can COMPLETELY imagine Vegeta writing that. Keep up the good work!

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* huge smile *

I just don't know what to say...

* sobs *

I'm just so emotionally right now...

* evil smile *

no I'm not... but this absolutely is THE BEST STORY EVER!

write a LOT MORE of these stories... and a second chapter, K!

do we have A DEAL?

Stephanie

::claps her hands:: That was beautiful! I love your stories. Good job. It kept my attention beginning to end.

Wow, that was incredibly good! I love the way Bulma completely remodeled Enma's way of doing things, everything 'modernized' ,lol! cool! Good ending too!

I can't wait for you to update 'Ki-blind', but I'm glad you took the time to write this one; it was a very enjoyable read!

All I can say is...DAMN! THIS STORY RULES!

This was a great, touching story, and I very much enjoyed reading it! *sigh* I think I'm sufficiently teary and depressed to write chapter 14 of my own story now ;)