I love this beautiful story. I remember watching the Square Dance episode as a kid feeling really let down at the end. You really did the characters justice and made an unforgetable moment with Kevin and Magaret dancing alone to The Jackson Five. If only it had been so.

Amazing storytelling! Thank you for this gem. :)

Hey, don't worry about the length. Yeah, maybe it could have been split up into chapters, but I thought it was great. I'm a big fan of the Wonder Years (obviously or I wouldn't be here) and I thought the descriptions of Kevin and the counselor (did I spell that right? hm) and all the other characters were fantastic! I loved the narration...it was all very well put together, long or not. Keep writing, you're really good! :)
Liz

I hope you write more.

Good job, although I'd have to agree with others who said it was too long. But so far its a very interesting story. I remember that episode and I was also disappointed with how it ended. Well keep up the good work and good luck!

this story is very endearing follows closely to series. keep up the good work and continue the story

hi,

Well when I was a bit younger a watched wibder years to.

You got lots of bad commend on your story.

But your only fault was making this story way to long. But thats it. You learn from it keep writing.

Once on a story I wrote What if you can find it on the show Dark Angel I got bad comment to but I continued and now the comment is really great so KEEP WRITING YOU'LL LEARN

Ok, now I know you must've worked a long time on this, but jeez, you shouldn't of had it as one big story, but broke it up into chapters, so it would be easier to swallow, and you probably would've gotten more reviews too. It would've given people something to wait for, instead of hitting them in the face with one gigantic story.

nightwolf87

TO LONG!

This story was horrible! (sorry)

Work on it a bit and make it shorter plz!

THIS WAS A PATHETIC ATTEMPT AT A STORY!

UGH IT WAS PAINFUL!

WRONG! TRY AGAIN!

it was to long

Seams like wrong catagory