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Naynay1130 12/31/12 . chapter 13Awww! Adorable! |
Queen of Air and Darkness 12/1/12 . chapter 12Thanks for the long chapter! There were also very few grammar/spelling mistakes in here, which I appreciate. Just wanted to say that in regards to this line: "It's in latin, so you'll have to refresh your native language a bit." That's not correct. If Puck's native language was Latin it would imply that he (and the Seelie/Unseelie myths in general) were ancient Roman myths, which is not correct. Puck's native language would be English or a type of Gaelic (either Irish or Scottish) if any human known language, because the Seelie/Unseelie myths are from the British Isles. I know you probably didn't know this; a lot of people don't. I just thought I'd tell you. :) Great chapter! |
aishachase97 11/22/12 . chapter 11Awww! So cute! Update soon! |
Naynay1130 11/21/12 . chapter 11Awww. Nice. I like this chapter. Puck and Willow sittin in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G! |
Are.you.okay.Annie 11/21/12 . chapter 10O This is really good PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love puck! |
aishachase97 11/19/12 . chapter 10CURSED? CURSED?/ OMG NOOOOOO! DON'T LET HER DIE! I WILL CRY IF YOU DO! |
Naynay1130 11/17/12 . chapter 10NO! Willow! Why?! Grr. Post soon. Pleeeeaaase? |
Naynay1130 11/15/12 . chapter 9Nice chapter. Well written. Well thought out. Very good. I loved it. |
JLdark 11/14/12 . chapter 9Your story is so good, can't wait for more, Inspecially like how Puck reactions are, I hope Willow has more romance moments with Puck. |
aishachase97 11/11/12 . chapter 9:D update soon please! |
xX Blood-Bond Xx 10/28/12 . chapter 8The story is interesting but needs more detail in surroundings and a little more in looks. |
aishachase97 10/13/12 . chapter 7Oh My Gosh! YOU NEED TO UP DATE AND SOON!:D cant wait! I love it! :D |
aishachase97 10/13/12 . chapter 4Babys mama! ahhaha funny... :D |
aishachase97 10/13/12 . chapter 2... Birds can get confused... :D |
aishachase97 10/13/12 . chapter 1REALLY REALLY LIKED IT! |