I loved the story, it was wonderful.

Wow this is such a great Diamond and Pippin story! I happened to come along it and I was sure glad I did! Great job!

Perfect! Loved the ending. Babies are always a great conclusion.
Was written very well; enjoyed reading it a lot!
Keep writing!

This is so cute! I had read the first 5 chapters a LONG time ago and really liked it, but then I checked again and the story has been gone for a long time, about a year (my computors wierd!) and now finally, it popped back up again, and I was so excited! this si so cute! I like the way ou ended it!

-sarah

That was wonderful! Everything worked out for Diamond and Pippin in the end. I just wish there was more to look forward to. Maybe later. Thank you for some lovely entertainment!

You are going to have them fall in love right?! I will be sad if you don't. And maybe throw things. But anyway...
I liked this chapter! Pippin and Diamond are finally getting along! It's great, and I love your writing style. Keep it up!

Aw... SO glad Pippin and Diamond are getting accustomed to eachother! LOVE THIS STORY! *hugs* Thank you for updating!

-Piper (The Hyper One)

Hey!
very cute. i was surprised to see that you had updated, but quite happy! r u going to continue on with the story then? i hope so. at least they dont hate eachother anymore! :) cute chapter and update soon!!
~*~Katy~*~

You should really continue this, I'd love to see when Pippin and Diamond start liking, and eventually loving each other like a married couple should. I hate seeing Pip so down and depressed! Poor Pip!

oh my god! this is the cutest story! i had a great time reading in! i'm getting so impatient for you to write another story! keep up the great writing! and hurry up with the next chapter!

Very good, please update, I'm sure you'd get more reviews if you do! I think this is really creative.

SHEESH!!!!! TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH TO GET THIS UP!!!!!! Oh well, it was well worth the wait!!!! ^_^ I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alenya: Do you ever shut up?

Me: QUIET YOU!!! *whacks with frying pan*

Alenya: Immature... can't even take a joke...

Me: DO NOT CALL ME INFANTILE YOU STINKYBUTT POOPHEAD!! *whacks with frying pan*

Okeday... YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOONER!!!!!! THAN LAST TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alenya: Oh... either shut up or render me unconscious!!!

Me: Okay! *whacks with frying pan*

Alenya: *falls over* *unconscious*

Well, if the rest of my pointless rambling-

Alenya: Really pointless *ducks frying pan*

-has not gotten this across, here it is:

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Piper (The Female Pippin)

This is quite cute and engaging. I like a lot of the details that you've chosen to include, such as the explanation of the politics of the marriage. I hope you continue this soon.

This isn't the end, right? I mean, they need to fall in love, and have many little hobbit children. Live happily ever after and all that. I'm glad that they actually got married; I was all scared that something would jump up and be like "I protest!" But I'm rambling. Good chapter!

Hey there!!
YAY an update...i had read this story but not reviewed as it had been a good while since the last update, but im really happy u added. i love ur story, im writing a pip/diamond fic of my own, Diamond of Long Cleeve (lol original title huh)! ok well update soon and ill check back later
~~Katy~~