|Reviews for In the Night|
| just.young.and.reckless 1/24/13 . chapter 5
Awesome story so far :) i really hope you update this again soon as i would love to read more!
| Guest 1/12/13 . chapter 5
I love it. Please! More!
| Nirvana14 1/10/13 . chapter 5
| Guest 10/29/12 . chapter 5
I rate 20
| Fanficlover 8/18/12 . chapter 5
I'm loveing this story so far! Please continue and update soon. You are an amazing writter!
| XxllTwistedHappyllxX 8/16/12 . chapter 1
I really think this story great potential. Some chapters drag on, but that's fine because it possibly has it's reasons. I personally don't envision Jonah acting the way he does in your story. Bits of his personality I can see, but some I don't. I guess some people just have different views.
Keep up the good work, and thank you for helping me with mine. I am going to do a little more research and redo it; I just went in blindly and abandoned it because it felt wrong. Thank you :)
| elementalxmen2015 8/15/12 . chapter 5
Really loving this! Please update soon! :)
| carol stevenson 8/15/12 . chapter 5
Yay an update! Keep going, would love to read more
| Spiritus-Sancti13 8/14/12 . chapter 5
Love it :) keep up the good work!
| carol stevenson 8/8/12 . chapter 4
Very well written, looking forward to more
| Guest 7/30/12 . chapter 4
This has become my favorite story. I like it even better than mine!
| ZeldaNut1 7/28/12 . chapter 3
Again, beautiful characterization! The conversation between Jonah and Clara was awesome, Jonah's character is perfect.
I can't wait to see where this goes!
Critisism: none so far! :D
| ZeldaNut1 7/28/12 . chapter 2
Oooooo this is getting interesting! *fangirl squeal*
I love you character Clara! Is this going to be a romance? If so, I like it already! She isn't a Mary-Sue, and her curiosity is awesome! I'm assuming she'll meet Jonah nest chapter?
| elementalxmen2015 7/24/12 . chapter 3
Loving this story! Can't wait to see where you take it :)
| GirlGamer1000 7/23/12 . chapter 3
I liked this chapter. I think you did a good job developing Jonah's personality. Keep writing pweas.