Awesome story so far :) i really hope you update this again soon as i would love to read more!

I love it. Please! More!

Really amazing!

I rate 20

I'm loveing this story so far! Please continue and update soon. You are an amazing writter!

star

I really think this story great potential. Some chapters drag on, but that's fine because it possibly has it's reasons. I personally don't envision Jonah acting the way he does in your story. Bits of his personality I can see, but some I don't. I guess some people just have different views.

Keep up the good work, and thank you for helping me with mine. I am going to do a little more research and redo it; I just went in blindly and abandoned it because it felt wrong. Thank you :)

Really loving this! Please update soon! :)

Yay an update! Keep going, would love to read more

Love it :) keep up the good work!

Very well written, looking forward to more

This has become my favorite story. I like it even better than mine!

Again, beautiful characterization! The conversation between Jonah and Clara was awesome, Jonah's character is perfect.

I can't wait to see where this goes!

Critisism: none so far! :D

Oooooo this is getting interesting! *fangirl squeal*

I love you character Clara! Is this going to be a romance? If so, I like it already! She isn't a Mary-Sue, and her curiosity is awesome! I'm assuming she'll meet Jonah nest chapter?

Loving this story! Can't wait to see where you take it :)

I liked this chapter. I think you did a good job developing Jonah's personality. Keep writing pweas.