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Reviews For: The Mission Begins-my version of the frist episode

theRegalBeagle
2007-04-22
ch 1,
abuselol that was cool!
Jombra
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuse*owns Season 1 and 2 of 3rd rock* That's a sweeto thing! If there's more, Joe's your stalker!
lillith-hangman
2006-09-20
ch 1,
abusethis story is really good! i love the pilot and your idea of it is great, especially Dick licking Mary's hand...well done!
Dr.Swirly
2004-06-11
ch 1,
abuseContinued off last one_"who wouldv'e thought Solomon was a jewish name when we got it off the side of that truck?"
jd burns
2004-04-30
ch 1,
abuseWho said anything about being harsh? *g* I can totally see Dick licking Mary's hand when he first met her.
Granted I never did see the pilot of the show, but it's believable none the less.
lightprincess
2004-04-05
ch 1,
abuseI am such a big fan of that show and I do love the mission song it's the greatest.
liv
2004-02-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseit was pretty good. I haven't seen the first episode so i don't know what it was like but i thought your version was good.
Chelsea
2003-10-17
ch 1, anon.
abusei think that was a great story about how they got settled in earth. i don't think that u don't hav to worry about getting harsh reveiws since it's ur 1st time! great job! ☺☻☺☻
Abby
2003-07-02
ch 1, anon.
abusePLEASE WRITE MORE! I don't really care about the story(though you are doing a good job with it) as long as you have some good parts with Tommy. (*gets a dreamy look on my face*) KEEP WRITING!
MysticSorceror
2003-03-06
ch 1,
abusegood job! I preffered it to your other fic, but you are a really talented writer, keep working on building your skills and talents and you'll be great in life.
therock3407
2002-12-07
ch 1,
abuseThis was a great story. Good job!
Tyler
2002-07-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseA good story, however, true to the series, "Solomon" was picked after the aliens saw it on the side of a truck. Tom, Dick, and Harry got their names after the expression "Tom, Dick, and Harry," and Sally got her name after what websters defines it as. Other than that, I like it.
Squishy Fish
2002-06-13
ch 1,
abuseHey, it's not bad! It's actually pretty cool... I really liked it:)
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