|Reviews for One Heart: Beating|
| Vaako 12/28/12 . chapter 1
That was beautiful :')
| Yumeno 7/23/12 . chapter 1
How lovely story ! I liked it, really.
Thank you for this short but adorable fiction. You have chosen words which were simple but moving.
What a pity we can not "romance" a pawn like this ! x)
( sorry for my mistakes, I'm french )
| darkloveeden 7/8/12 . chapter 1
nice short story :P
| banxi 7/7/12 . chapter 1
This is beautiful - I love it! Very well structured, your use of adjectives and single-sentence paragraphs is moving. (: