| Reviews for One Heart: Beating |
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Vaako 12/28/12 . chapter 1That was beautiful :') |
Yumeno 7/23/12 . chapter 1 How lovely story ! I liked it, really. Thank you for this short but adorable fiction. You have chosen words which were simple but moving. What a pity we can not "romance" a pawn like this ! x) ( sorry for my mistakes, I'm french ) |
darkloveeden 7/8/12 . chapter 1nice short story :P |
banxi 7/7/12 . chapter 1This is beautiful - I love it! Very well structured, your use of adjectives and single-sentence paragraphs is moving. (: |