|Reviews for John Statley: The Red Werefox|
| archsage328 11/1/12 . chapter 1
I really want to find more stories about John and Lilith. Do you plan on bringing those two together here?
| Dr Facer 7/23/12 . chapter 1
I suggest you rework the way you do dialogue. The way you did here is script, and that isn't allowed here. It's best if you indicate lines of dialogue with ("").
Hope that you can fix this in future chapters.