|Reviews for Pokemon Ranger: Arcanines of War|
| Dustchu 2/18/13 . chapter 1
Cooooooool! this was an awesome story! :D It was awesome! My brain hurts. but this story is awesome. I say awesome a lot. Hehe. Great writing and awesome work. Dustchu out
| UltimateB3ll 7/11/12 . chapter 1
Got my account back, though it looks strange now. Almost like facebook.
So this is the prologue for your pokemon fic?
you are a weird guy.
Sorry for haven't giving you any reviews of late. As you have heard (or not heard) from Megaauthor, I've been on Law School. And while I am not free for doing his beta, he understood why.
Your story in Pocket Monster (or pokemon on American and Europeon point of view) universe involving military superpower is... uninteresting to say the least. Everyone in their grandmama would know a tank would decimate anything in its path. I mostly skip the military scene, as it gives me a lot of headache.
Raine and Blade... aren't they the OC for Megaauthor themselves? He told me the odd layout you would make, as he is being rather skeptical on how you could be being... well you. But I have seen major (and I mean MAJOR) chances here, and how realistic you have portrait it to be. This, and you reinforce how TR works of all things make any less sense if they are not corrupt bastard themselves.
I own a Pokemon Conquest (I'm a turn based strategy fanatic; turn on me and your dead in 15 days flat) and I can see where this is going; you are going to introduce Conquest character in it right? I hope you got the personality nail right, because if you don't, you will have no mercy from me. NO. MERCY. AT. ALL.
Got to go
| MegaAuthor 7/8/12 . chapter 1
Megaauthor here, I just got word that UltimateB3ll is unable to login; her account here is frozen she said. So if she pass a review let me know k?
So many reference regarding Pokemon Conquest. I'm even surprised that you could own one. Even a missingno is mention.
Off to review then.
First off, there is a TON of military action on a quiet little place no one cares about, and even if someone launch that nuke the news would probably sayz "Legendary pokemon on rampage Blah blah blah and are quiet down by a few trainers". I mean no disrespect for the military, but in the pokemon world, your guns will never be as big as the one sitting on the throne of the universe. I give Havoc and the General a big salute though.
Team Rocket here appears like an elite than those ball-less meat fodder who owns Rattata and Zubat, or Growlithe and Electro, or any other first tier pokemon they are carrying. Fact is, these elites sounds like they have seen tons of crap before knowing that they cannot win and decides to escape leaving the fodders to their death. Hmm... I guess all evil cooperation think it is a good investment to abandon your base while your underling fought on unknowing that their boss is already halfway to Hawaii.
Raine and Blade is introduce... and I'm quite surprise.
At first I thought Blade would simple appear out of nowhere inside the lab to safe my human OC as you have claimed, but this one actually make more sense that your previous claim; Raine runs away with other test subject (which you have poorly descript since the focus is on her and not the other escapees... probably died fighting between the crossfire... who knows?) into the jungle already donning a uniform (which is a bonus; I would have strangle you all the way here my friend were she naked. Trust me; my reach is limitless) and Blade is an elder Scyther pokemon originate on the island on a guerrila tactics. I say this is as ingenious as it gets.
Havoc does a crotch shot; does anyone in the internet knows what is the most difficult shot next to head shot? :D
So Havoc rescued Raine and Blade; I can tell this is 'hey long time no see' scene is going to happen in many chapters later on your ongoing fic. Looking forward on it.
I'm unimpressed however that Pokemon Conquest characters are mention; I know you have taking the liking of it (believe me, I've seen pokemon addiction before - they are not good) but please use it less and less from now on; this is Pokemon Uprising chapter, different world, different age. You can use their reference and historical battle, but don't reintroduce them in your ongoing epic story. Or need I remind you of mixing with B.A.Y? Stay on the grey side.
In the end it also shows a very, very tiny spoiler on how the war ends... err... (looks at above description) how come a prequel... has a small spoiler ending?
A little 4th wall breaking also wouldn't hurt. Now then, do us a favor Kellyn and don't unload your weapon at SOTF; he still have a story to complete. You are free to do whatever you want when he is done.
P.S. Thanks for the (rather late) birthday fics. Enjoyed it every minute.