Wonderful 1 shot!

this was great keep it coming til next time

Great job.

while I didn't like either of the DT/SPD crossover episodes (a distinct lack of Tommy, to be honest, though "History" is th better of the two simply because its better executed), I do love the AaR twists to them. Poor Toomy. I wonder if Cruger had any idea how panicked erasing his memory would make him.

Personally, I'd love to see more of the story featuring Elizabeth on your web site. It just has so much potential. But I would still love to see those one shots. Maybe some start-ups to what the SPD Rangers referred to in the AaR version of "History"? Conner's Olympic dream realizations, Kira's record deal coming into fruition, Ethan becoming a software mogul (at least that's what his implied future is), Trent signing on to be a comic artist? Or even more adventures in marraige (or even parenting) for Tommy and Kim?

Good chapter update soon