Yaaaay! They're together Ahhh! Finally! And Chris had better kick some cobra ass. You know I mean... the cobras, not.. a cobra .. Because im pretty sure snakes don't have asses O.o

well, leaving a review. lol. cute ending with the dancing

Awesome story! :)

YES!:D Adjectives!:') I'm so proud of you! :P Although (unfortuanatly) It was very short, I totally loved it!:) It was very proffesional, very well written and most of all short and snappy which is what I love most about your writing. Poor Veronica:( She should totally tell someone :'l I promised myself i wouldn't cry! :''''l. So much for that -.- Dun Dun Dun Chris Chambers to the rescue! ( Loving the bookcover btwz ;))

River Lovee!:)

- Cherry:)!xx

Yaaaay! :)
I looove this story so muchh!:') I like how she's got the scar, an imperfection but Chris still loves her :D unlike any other guy on the planet who want the stupid blondey booby girls
-.-! I like the way you write, short and snappy, straight to the point the complete opposite of the way I write, I take about a hundred words just to say "they looked at each other" i do prefer concentrating on emotions rather than actions. I like to paint a picture with words Haha :L what can I say, i love me similies!:D
If I had one critisism it would be to maybe put a little More emotinal intimacy in it, how does she feel when Ace attacks her? Scared, weak, defenceless? Other than that I loved it, please update?:)

Lots of love ;)

-Cherry:)!xx

yay he saved her. i mean, obviously he would, but still.

aww its pretty adorable. i like the thing u did at the top with the look closer.