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| Darlin 2003-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI thought you were going to kill her, darn! Anyway this was good. Obviously you can tell I don't care for Carly but it's the 2nd Carly I don't like. Sarah Brown as the 1st was an excellent actress that you could really feel for even while hating what she was doing. This other one's awful for me to watch but to each his own. I enjoyed this story though but probably because it seemed quite believable that she was a goner. Anyway, the end was quite nice. |
| suziplu 2002-06-12 ch 1, | abuseOMG!!!! THIS IS SUCH A SAD STORY. I LOVED IT!! I almost cried, and I never cry. I hope you write more soon. This is definately a great start to this story. GOOD JOB!!!:) your new fan, suzi |