This story has really creepy potential. Sounds like Dean has a hitchhiker.

Wha- No. What? No! You can't just end it there! That was delightfully creepy, I think I had the same disturbing grin Dean had while I was reading. The way you wrote Dean's insanity was chilling.

Ugh, let me write like you. ;n;

Super excited for this! :)

Wowowowowowowow!

What a great first chapter! I really hope we get more, more more...! (like right now :D)

Oh man you gotta update soon! This is awesome! Love the cliffhanger! And how you've captured how different Dean is after returning. Love it! :D Can't wait for more :D

Creepy... I hope you post more soon!

You know, I liked this beginning and I can see a lot of potential in this story. I love the way you write out of control Dean. I am, however, almost afraid to get invested in it, because I was really liking Phantom Hunt (and this one reminds of of that one), and it's been months since you posted an update. I'm afraid you're not going to ever finish that one, and that might happen here, too.

I'm not trying to push you or hurt your feelings. It's just very disappointing getting involved in and excited about a really good story and have the author give up on it before it's finished.

Uh oh, this can't be good! Some kind of flashback to psycho Dean in hell?

You're back!