You go girl! Go get your Jake! lol

Oh, I'm all excited now!

This chapter's made me like Sam even more, I think.

Can't wait for the next chapter (:

"Jacob Black, get ready because you are going to have to deal with the wrath of Renesmee Masen." You go show that man who's boss, Ness! Nice chapter, bb. Short, but to the point. Good job!

Oh I can't wait to see what is going to happen! Poor Nessie

So is Nahuel a vampire? I feel so bad for them, I can't wait until Ness goes and finds him!

Great job, bb! Ugh. Why do you have to make it sad? I mean, come on! Throw drama out the window and them have a fluff-filled romance full of kittens and fluff and rainbows and unicorns and...

Yeah, I know. It wouldn't work for a variety of reasons, one of them being Nahuel was an idiot and went and got himself turned into a freaking vampire. Stupid Brazillian asshole. I wonder what he was even doing in Florida. Stupid man. Ugh. (I don't really like him, if you can't tell.)

My Jacob. So, since he and Ness broke up, he can take a little detour through my city, right? I can give him comfort and reassurance and blow jobs and make him yummy food and tell him everything is going to be okay. I can do that, right? I mean, until Ness comes to look for him, that is. Ugh.

Anyway, great job! I can't wait until they get back together!

Nawww. This kind of sucks.

No. It does suck.

It's sucks major hairy balls.

I feel so super bad for Nessie. I mean, a goodbye through a note! I understand why, but still . . .

Update super soon (:

Uh oh, fights and sex and Nauhel. Shit is getting complicated . . .

I love Sam. He's so badass. A bit like I'd imagine Emmett to be (:

I think it's really really cute how he spent the night, but no sex or anything. And it's like they're dating. Well they are, really.

Alright, I'm off to read the next bit (: !

Lol, Billy. Looks like Nessie can keep Jacob in line better than you can. Suck it.

They kissed!

Ahhh!

Ooooh, what made Jacob and his dad move there?

I love his line, "After checking me out, you aren't even going to ask me for my phone number?"

Very blunt. Very Jacob (:

Sounds like Nessie's got a bit of a crush!

Now that I know who Sam is based on, I hear his voice in my head when I read his lines, lol. Good job, bb! I can't say I'm excited to see Nahuel, but I am eager to see what happens next :)

Stupid ex-fiance's! I can't wait to hear what happens!

Dixie

Okay, so FFn is having issues with reviews. This pisses me off. As they say, if it's not broke, don't fix it. Reviews worked fine (most of the time) until they did this new thing. It would be awesome if it actually worked. Of course, it *IS* FFn; why would it work? LOL.

Anyway, I loved this chapter! I like Jake's POV. Of course, I like everything about Jake! I'm so excited to see how this progresses and what happens next. I really like Billy, too. He seems like a pretty straightforward kinda guy. Oh, and the kiss at the end? Hot damn! So excited for more :)

Loved it! Their first encounter was perfect. I like the fact that Jake caught Nessie checking him out. I would be drooling too if he was standing in front of me. I am very interested to see how this story unfolds.

Loved it again. Loved the banter between them all. Billy is hilarious. I guess boys will be boys even Our beloved Jake... "Her breast are a decent size."
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