Wow. I'll admit, I wasn't sure about this at the beginning, because the dialogue was formatted strangely, but my goodness it got better straight away. These Stream-Of-Consciousness pieces are really thoughtful and moving, not to mention engaging. Please, keep writing! :D

Teleryn

Ugh. Feelings. I just had feelings. So many feelings. This was beautifully written.

Um, okay, so that was me that reviewed earlier, but for some reason FFN had me logged in as a guest. idk. Anyway, I am now adding to favorites! Also...please write more things like this?

AAAAAAH This is brilliant! I loved that you showed a glimpse of what the lesser-known Jets were going through instead of focusing on the main characters as so many people do. Adding this to favorites!