Interesting change of events. How will this spell out for the group of dwarves and hobbit if they will be involved? Hmm...can't wait for more!

So, is it safe to assume that the return journey will be quite perilous? :D I love how she ran into Legolas, and it doesn't surprise me at all that he would try to help. Can't wait for the next post!

Really interesting story so far, can't wait to read the rest!

Ohh I can't wait to see how this develops. I truly have enjoyed watching how the characters have developed over the course of your chapters; and again I can't get over how totally delighted I am that you killed off the expected heroine in the very beginning. In any case, keep up the grand work!

Please update soon. I rather like this, although I find it tragic that someone as brave and clever as Helena had to die so soon. Please continue this.

Good start. Update soon!

I liked this. Add more

this is a good story so far

I applaud you for killing off one heroine and bringing to the forefront another. Looking forward to more.

Wow quite good! Thank you for sharing this was a grand read!

Dear gin893,

I very much enjoyed your story and i can't wait to read more from you. It would be a nice idea to write about Helena's family, in my opinion.

Not bad at all for a first - I am even very willing to go up to good ;-) She seems very sensible, and I like reading about good sense...