Nice start, keep it up! Hope to hear from you soon, good luck! :)

It was adorable :3 !
But I just need to point out that it felt like.. Uhh how do I put this ? I just felt like the third person pov wasn't describing everything enough ? Damn I don't know how to put what I think in the right words xD ! I hope you get what I mean.
Anyway, other than that it was good :D

Scarlett xx