Pour être franc avec toi, j'ai vu des bataille plus longue et épique. Tu devrais plus décrire les actions, et les effets visuel des attaques des pokémon.

I really enjoy this

This story is soooo cool. Please update as soon as you possibly can. I really want to see how the rescue dawn.

please keep ash and dawn together I hope they meet soon and tell their actual feelings to each other

Hey man good the way do you like AshXElesa (I forgot what the shipping was called) If so can you write so please don't be a one shot.i hate those.

nice job!(yay!cilan's back!):3

yep,its black&white2.(i saw the animated trailer)the main guy has a lucario. This stories going great!keep writing! :3

Good work! But where's Dawn? I hope she's soon in the story.

Woah.I am a Pokefan,and this is awesome.I got one this have to do with the new Black&White 2 games? You can't play with pokemon like Lucario until after the first prt of the game,and the only non unova from the show(Unless its changed:I haven't seen the show since just before Driftveil,in Chargestone Cave w/ the Profs.) was Pikachu. You did good for the 1st one.(I just joined the site today ;3)