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| Reviews for Mario's inner insanity |
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   BigSlayerGuyMan 7/13/12 . chapter 1Um... Okay. Dialogue, like when you wrote Hurry! Toad screamed, should be like this "Hurry!" Toad screamed. Anyway, Bowser is a koopa. Not a dragon.. And for the record, this is terrible .No offense. Nice profile pic of Young Link, though. |
| Sonic103 7/11/12 . chapter 2 Me: 0-0 this is not rated what it should be... Nazo: pulease i do this kind of damage every ten minutes... |
| Sonic103 7/10/12 . chapter 1 Me:...well that was interesting... Sonic: excuse me while i go barf... Me: dialouge and paragraphsa...the two things you need in these stories! |
| GirlNamedFede 7/10/12 . chapter 1 ? Needs some another chapters ;) |
