|Reviews for Mario's inner insanity|
| BigSlayerGuyMan 7/13/12 . chapter 1
Um... Okay. Dialogue, like when you wrote Hurry! Toad screamed, should be like this "Hurry!" Toad screamed.
Anyway, Bowser is a koopa. Not a dragon..
And for the record, this is terrible .No offense. Nice profile pic of Young Link, though.
| Sonic103 7/11/12 . chapter 2
Me: 0-0 this is not rated what it should be...
Nazo: pulease i do this kind of damage every ten minutes...
| Sonic103 7/10/12 . chapter 1
Me:...well that was interesting...
Sonic: excuse me while i go barf...
Me: dialouge and paragraphsa...the two things you need in these stories!
| GirlNamedFede 7/10/12 . chapter 1
? Needs some another chapters ;)