Loved every word of it!

Poor Makoto... I feel so sorry for her. She's drifting into despair but at least she still has Hiro to show her the way for a bright future!

HiroxMakoto will be a good pairing if Makoto wasn't that old. I didn't think she was 26. I thought she was the same age like Fumi. You know, 21. But oh well. Still a nice pairing and the most tease one in the game.

I guess this ending is better than the True ending since Al didn't died and the fact that everyone kept their memories. :)

A strong hint of Hiro x Makoto I see, huh.

Kinda disappointed that the game didn't give much background about Makoto. Sure, she had a terrible accident but what ever happened to her parents? They didn't mention once about them. Did they died during or before the demon incident?

Wow nobody died in this! But it reminded me of Persona! And it was neutral enough to be open! Like is he going to live with Alcor and shack up, is Yamato going to have a normal life with friends? Etc. etc. Or is everyone going to have a scooby doo ending?

I rather enjoyed reading this and the batman video game mechanics you put into this as well.

Needs more desu2 fanfiction.

Ok the battling is weird but I rather like how it's with everyone's point of view.

Will there be Yandere!Yamato here?

...-shivers-

Cool start! I just love his path totally!

very cool story, though now i feel more pity for Al Saiduq, the way everyone except Hiro are ignoring him and making him look like a bad thing, and poor Makoto
very nice story, hope you wrote more of Devil Survivor fanfics