Loved it a lot!

3 Kammel

Beautiful! You really surprised me with the ending. Oh, man, that was not a dream I would have wanted to wake up from either...poor Fi!

I'm sorry to barge into your reviews like this, especially since what I am about to ask is irrelevant to this story, which I am sure is extraordinary by the way...
It's just, I was wondering if you had any plans to continue "The Burden of Perfection?" it's just I really enjoyed it but you haven't continued it in quite some time and I would love it if you could please just write at least one last chapter just to finish it, just so it's not left unfinished and I'm not left waiting?
If you think it impertinent of me to ask this of you, I understand but please, if you could just consider it I'd be grateful to you.
Thanks for your time

What a beautiful "rêve" and sad at the same time !
Beautiful writing that takes us deep into the story.
Do we have the story of the dream or the nightmare of Michael ? ;-)

so powerful and so sad. You write beautifully.

I LOVED this story. Absolutely loved it. I would love to see MIchael and Fiona spend the rest of their lives on an island where they have nobody else but each other. Perfect and tastefully written. Please write another chapter again soon.

this is flawless.

Wow. I'm literally speechless. Just wow.

Oh, this was so good! I almost cried when she woke up back in prison; her dream was so real! I love all the descriptive language. I felt like a voyeur. I knew I should look away, but somehow I just couldn't. Then when Fiona awoke from her perfect dream, I wanted to cry right along with her! You said you were wanting to write some angst. Well you did! But this type of angst was perfect. Fulfilling, but yet, leaving the reader to want so much more!

oh so wonderful!
thank you for writing it.
it was perfect!